1.結(jié)構(gòu)不平行 例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books. 當(dāng)使用連詞將一系列的單詞 聯(lián)接起來(lái)的時(shí)候，應(yīng)當(dāng)使用詞性相同或同一類(lèi)型的短語(yǔ)?！?BR> 2.不知所云 例：Many companies began using computers mouth.
3.段落過(guò)長(zhǎng)，不分段 主語(yǔ)與動(dòng)詞一致問(wèn)題 She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time. 主語(yǔ)和動(dòng)詞在數(shù)方面不一 致。
4.句子別扭 We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed. 措辭過(guò)長(zhǎng)或不清。換 言之，句子顯得滑稽可笑。
5.不要使用縮寫(xiě) 在正式的寫(xiě)作中不要使用縮寫(xiě)形式(can’t， don’t，it’s， we’ll， they’ve等等) ，而應(yīng)當(dāng)使用單詞完整形式 (cannot， do not，it is，we will，they have等等)?！?BR> 6.關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)重復(fù) Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores. 不能在該句的主要 主語(yǔ)和主要?jiǎng)釉~前使用連詞?！?BR> 7.句子不完整 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend in high school. 句子沒(méi)有主要主語(yǔ)或主要?jiǎng)釉~，因?yàn)槠鋵?shí)它應(yīng)是一個(gè)從句。這是桓齜淺? 常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤，修改的方法是將兩個(gè)句子連接起來(lái)?！?BR> 8.不要使用get When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and got into bed. Get太不正式，意思也過(guò)于含糊，不適合用在正式的 場(chǎng)合。應(yīng)將get改為一個(gè)更加具體的單詞，如become, receive, find, achieve, 等等?！?BR> 9.書(shū)寫(xiě)難以辨認(rèn) 信息不正確 I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there. 傳的信息不正確，或 者讓人聽(tīng)起來(lái)覺(jué)得可能不正確（如果確實(shí)是正確的，應(yīng)當(dāng)解釋為什么這樣，因?yàn)樽x者 不認(rèn)為是正確的）。上述例句中，all的意思是；我們不能絕對(duì)地說(shuō)每一件新 東西都是從美國(guó)誕生的。為保險(xiǎn)起見(jiàn)，應(yīng)當(dāng)使用many或most?！》怯⒄Z(yǔ)單詞 Computers are very helpful and advantageable. 盡管看起來(lái)象個(gè)單詞， 其實(shí)不是，至少不是個(gè)英文單詞。使用這個(gè)單詞的另一種形式?！?BR> 10.介詞多余 I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We
went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband. 在表 示這種意思時(shí)此單詞不能與介詞連用。這種情況常見(jiàn)于downtown，home，there， here等詞。這些詞語(yǔ)在英語(yǔ)中是副詞而非名詞，因而不能在它們前面添加介詞。
11.跑題或不相關(guān) There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car. 這個(gè)意思與文章的主題無(wú)關(guān)?！?BR> 12.陳詞濫調(diào) It is okay for children to fail sometimes. 所表 達(dá)的意思很普通 大多數(shù)人都已經(jīng)知道到了，因而就沒(méi)有必要再說(shuō)出來(lái)?！?BR> 13.標(biāo)點(diǎn)問(wèn)題 I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet. 這是一 個(gè)非常普遍的問(wèn)題！許多學(xué)生在句子中使用了太多的句號(hào)，尤其是當(dāng)他們用手寫(xiě)的時(shí) 候?！?BR> 14.重復(fù)冗余 Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints. 一種意思的表述不止一次，或者某個(gè)詞語(yǔ)不必要?！?BR> 15.單數(shù)/復(fù)數(shù) Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths. 單詞 需要從單數(shù)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)，或者由復(fù)數(shù)變成單數(shù)。 單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞 單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞不能單 獨(dú)使用，應(yīng)該將其變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)形式或者加上限定詞（a, the, my, his, her, Gary’s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等）?！?BR> 16.拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤 主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或賓語(yǔ)有問(wèn)題 I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday. 句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)有問(wèn)題 缺少主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或賓 語(yǔ)，或者這些成分重復(fù)。
17.語(yǔ)氣與文章不符 I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo,
and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out. 語(yǔ)氣與文章其他部分不相符 可能是過(guò)于正式或者太不正式。
3.段落過(guò)長(zhǎng)，不分段 主語(yǔ)與動(dòng)詞一致問(wèn)題 She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time. 主語(yǔ)和動(dòng)詞在數(shù)方面不一 致。
4.句子別扭 We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed. 措辭過(guò)長(zhǎng)或不清。換 言之，句子顯得滑稽可笑。
5.不要使用縮寫(xiě) 在正式的寫(xiě)作中不要使用縮寫(xiě)形式(can’t， don’t，it’s， we’ll， they’ve等等) ，而應(yīng)當(dāng)使用單詞完整形式 (cannot， do not，it is，we will，they have等等)?！?BR> 6.關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)重復(fù) Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores. 不能在該句的主要 主語(yǔ)和主要?jiǎng)釉~前使用連詞?！?BR> 7.句子不完整 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend in high school. 句子沒(méi)有主要主語(yǔ)或主要?jiǎng)釉~，因?yàn)槠鋵?shí)它應(yīng)是一個(gè)從句。這是桓齜淺? 常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤，修改的方法是將兩個(gè)句子連接起來(lái)?！?BR> 8.不要使用get When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and got into bed. Get太不正式，意思也過(guò)于含糊，不適合用在正式的 場(chǎng)合。應(yīng)將get改為一個(gè)更加具體的單詞，如become, receive, find, achieve, 等等?！?BR> 9.書(shū)寫(xiě)難以辨認(rèn) 信息不正確 I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there. 傳的信息不正確，或 者讓人聽(tīng)起來(lái)覺(jué)得可能不正確（如果確實(shí)是正確的，應(yīng)當(dāng)解釋為什么這樣，因?yàn)樽x者 不認(rèn)為是正確的）。上述例句中，all的意思是；我們不能絕對(duì)地說(shuō)每一件新 東西都是從美國(guó)誕生的。為保險(xiǎn)起見(jiàn)，應(yīng)當(dāng)使用many或most?！》怯⒄Z(yǔ)單詞 Computers are very helpful and advantageable. 盡管看起來(lái)象個(gè)單詞， 其實(shí)不是，至少不是個(gè)英文單詞。使用這個(gè)單詞的另一種形式?！?BR> 10.介詞多余 I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We
went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband. 在表 示這種意思時(shí)此單詞不能與介詞連用。這種情況常見(jiàn)于downtown，home，there， here等詞。這些詞語(yǔ)在英語(yǔ)中是副詞而非名詞，因而不能在它們前面添加介詞。
11.跑題或不相關(guān) There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car. 這個(gè)意思與文章的主題無(wú)關(guān)?！?BR> 12.陳詞濫調(diào) It is okay for children to fail sometimes. 所表 達(dá)的意思很普通 大多數(shù)人都已經(jīng)知道到了，因而就沒(méi)有必要再說(shuō)出來(lái)?！?BR> 13.標(biāo)點(diǎn)問(wèn)題 I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet. 這是一 個(gè)非常普遍的問(wèn)題！許多學(xué)生在句子中使用了太多的句號(hào)，尤其是當(dāng)他們用手寫(xiě)的時(shí) 候?！?BR> 14.重復(fù)冗余 Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints. 一種意思的表述不止一次，或者某個(gè)詞語(yǔ)不必要?！?BR> 15.單數(shù)/復(fù)數(shù) Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths. 單詞 需要從單數(shù)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)，或者由復(fù)數(shù)變成單數(shù)。 單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞 單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞不能單 獨(dú)使用，應(yīng)該將其變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)形式或者加上限定詞（a, the, my, his, her, Gary’s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等）?！?BR> 16.拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤 主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或賓語(yǔ)有問(wèn)題 I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday. 句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)有問(wèn)題 缺少主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或賓 語(yǔ)，或者這些成分重復(fù)。
17.語(yǔ)氣與文章不符 I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo,
and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out. 語(yǔ)氣與文章其他部分不相符 可能是過(guò)于正式或者太不正式。