專(zhuān)四應(yīng)試技巧(寫(xiě)作篇2:句子的連貫性)2

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    下列句子中都存在不連貫的問(wèn)題,請(qǐng)修改并指出屬于哪類(lèi)情況。
    1)He asked the policeman what had happened to him.
    2)Not only he did make a promise, but he kept.
    3)All are ready, isn’t it?
    4)Listening to the wind and smell the fragrant of the lily, you will found that the summer is coming.
    5)The most important reason I accept his advice is his knowledge of marketing I know from his words.
     參考答案
    1)He asked the policeman,“What happened to you?”
    / He asked the policeman,“What happened to me?”
    代詞與先行詞不一致
    2)Not only did he make a promise, but he kept.
    連詞使用不當(dāng)(not only前置一定要用倒裝句)
    3)All are ready, aren't they?
    代詞不一致
    4)Listening to the wind and smelling the fragrant of the lily, you will found that the summer is coming.結(jié)構(gòu)不平行
    5)I accept his advice because I know he is keen in marketing.
    語(yǔ)態(tài)不一致