寫作絕招三(文章主體段落三大殺手锏)
一、舉實例
思維短路,舉實例!提出一個觀點,舉實例!提出一個方案,舉實例!而且者也是我們揭示一個觀點的方式,任何情況下,
只要我們無法繼續(xù)文章,不管三七二十一,盡管舉例子!
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible simulative factor in making ads,
such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
更多句型:
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
二、做比較方法:寫完一個要點,比較與之相似的;又寫完一個要點,再比較與之相反的;
世界上沒有同樣的指紋,沒有相同的樹葉,文章亦同,只有通過比較,你才會發(fā)現(xiàn)二者的相同點(through comparison)和
不同點(through contrast)。下面是一些短語:
相似的比較:
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比較:
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary,
compared with …, …
三、換言之沒話說了,可以換一句話再說,讓你的文章在多一些字,或者文鄒鄒地說,是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點。
實際就是重復(fù)重復(fù)再重復(fù)!下面的句子實際上就三個字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
或者上面我們舉過的例子:I cannot bear it.
可以用短語表達(dá):I cannot put up with it.
因此可以這樣說:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.
更多短語:
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply
英語寫作要訣twenty-word formula
agreement: 主語和謂語在人稱、數(shù)上的一致,關(guān)系代詞與先行詞的一致。
ambiguity: 盡量不去使用可能引起歧義的詞語或句子。
brief: 文章"簡為貴",要抓住要點,簡明扼要。
coherence: 文理通順,前后連貫。
development: 主題的發(fā)揮應(yīng)當(dāng)充分、合理、正確。
division: 詞匯、句子、段落要分配使用得當(dāng),劃分要清楚,避免使用重復(fù)字句和種子片段。
figures: 正確合理使用各類修辭格式。
inflated diction: 不使用做作的語言。
key: 用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)鍵詞突出主題,每段都應(yīng)有主題句。
logical: 內(nèi)容要符合邏輯。
message: 信息要新鮮、確實、可信。
omit: 合理刪除多余的不必要部分。
proposition: 主張、觀點、論述要清楚肯切、合情入理