12月六級(jí)作文為例，我們選用一篇11分段的現(xiàn)場(chǎng)文章，分析其特點(diǎn)。首先要指出的是，選用11分段的現(xiàn)場(chǎng)例文是因?yàn)?，?duì)大多數(shù)考生來(lái)說(shuō)，這個(gè)目標(biāo)更現(xiàn)實(shí)一些Dear Sir/Madam,
I am pleased with your offer of the position as a salesman. Thank you very much for your appreciation and kindness.
Unfortunately, I have to say sorry for this opportunity. Several reasons may account for my decision. Firstly, your company is far away from my home, which means that the cost for my traffic is likely to be greater than what I expected. Besides, as an experienced salesman, I wish very much to be a sales manager, to be frank. Last but not least, the company, ABB, shares the opinion above. In other words, it agrees to double my salary, and offers me the position I want.
From what has been discussed above, I cannot help but turn down your offer. Though people in growing numbers are waiting for this, I strongly believe that I am a top one in this field. Sorry! Anyhow, thank you again for your efforts, with best wishes. Obviously, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to this issue.
Yours,
Norman
本文171個(gè)字，盡管仍然有少量較生硬的套用，和部分不妥表達(dá)，但其結(jié)構(gòu)完整，思路清楚，中心突出，層次分明，語(yǔ)言靈活，無(wú)重大語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。保守估計(jì)，11分?jǐn)?shù)段是完全可以拿到的。在該文中，我們不難看出，它比較成功的借用了“中心句＋1、2、3”模式，英文文章的結(jié)構(gòu)和清晰表達(dá)得以顯現(xiàn)。所以，握好英語(yǔ)作文考試特征和得分技巧，就能寫出一篇不錯(cuò)的六級(jí)作文。同時(shí)，英語(yǔ)寫作的提高和模式的固化，有助于英文思維和應(yīng)用能力的提高。
I am pleased with your offer of the position as a salesman. Thank you very much for your appreciation and kindness.
Unfortunately, I have to say sorry for this opportunity. Several reasons may account for my decision. Firstly, your company is far away from my home, which means that the cost for my traffic is likely to be greater than what I expected. Besides, as an experienced salesman, I wish very much to be a sales manager, to be frank. Last but not least, the company, ABB, shares the opinion above. In other words, it agrees to double my salary, and offers me the position I want.
From what has been discussed above, I cannot help but turn down your offer. Though people in growing numbers are waiting for this, I strongly believe that I am a top one in this field. Sorry! Anyhow, thank you again for your efforts, with best wishes. Obviously, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to this issue.
Yours,
Norman
本文171個(gè)字，盡管仍然有少量較生硬的套用，和部分不妥表達(dá)，但其結(jié)構(gòu)完整，思路清楚，中心突出，層次分明，語(yǔ)言靈活，無(wú)重大語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。保守估計(jì)，11分?jǐn)?shù)段是完全可以拿到的。在該文中，我們不難看出，它比較成功的借用了“中心句＋1、2、3”模式，英文文章的結(jié)構(gòu)和清晰表達(dá)得以顯現(xiàn)。所以，握好英語(yǔ)作文考試特征和得分技巧，就能寫出一篇不錯(cuò)的六級(jí)作文。同時(shí)，英語(yǔ)寫作的提高和模式的固化，有助于英文思維和應(yīng)用能力的提高。