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寫作訓(xùn)練的基本方法:
    1.上我的課
    2. 翻譯
    3.背誦
    4.寫日記
    開頭例文:
    地球也許并不是為了人類生存才存在并且也許它原本不是今天這個(gè)樣子的。人類在地球迄今為止上的所有活動(dòng)無不對地球的健康產(chǎn)生了影響。至于這些影響到底是使地球變得更適于生存還是對地球造成了破壞則是一個(gè)永恒無法絕對回答的爭議。
    The earth perhaps does not exist for human beings to survive and thrive on it and it was, surely, not what it is today. (24words) All human activities on the earth have changed the landscape and exerted impacts on the health of the earth. Have the human activities harmed the earth? Or have the earth has changed a better place to live? The answers to these questions will vary considerably as time goes on and on.
    總計(jì)75 words, 如果去掉首句24單詞,文章開頭依然成立,并且不失分。則構(gòu)成典型的
    (現(xiàn)象+ 問題 + 觀點(diǎn))開頭風(fēng)格。 文章中作者的觀點(diǎn)非常明確,屬于典型的中立寫作布局開。
    280頁173道題目:借錢和友誼的論證
    小詞的價(jià)值
    To borrow money from a friend has little to do with the maintenance of friendship because friendship depends less on money than on the love, honesty, and understanding between them. That is to say to borrow money will make the friendship stronger and closer if they love and understand each other. In this case, friendship will go on and on and on. However, without the love and mutual understanding friendship will be one day gone with the wind. Therefore it is clear that love and understanding is the very basis (foundation) of friendship which has been (figuratively) described as the light on the earth and the salt in the world. Money, on the contrary, is no.
    段落內(nèi)部的銜接分析
    Social resources are similarly an indispensable prerequisite to a successful innovation. Many inventions have foundered because the social resources vital for their realization—the capital, materials, and skilled personnel—were not available. The notebooks of Leonardo da Vinci are full of ideas for helicopters, submarines, and airplanes, but few of these reached even the model stage because resources of one sort or another were lacking. The resource of capital involves the existence of surplus productivity and an organization capable of directing the available wealth into channels in which the inventor can use it. The resource of materials involves the availability of appropriate metallurgical, ceramic, plastic, or textile substances that can perform whatever functions a new invention requires of them. The resource of skilled personnel implies the presence of technicians capable of constructing new artifacts and devising novel processes. A society, in short, has to be well primed with suitable resources in order to sustain technological innovation
    段落的學(xué)習(xí):翻譯練習(xí)
    OG273頁81題 關(guān)于人和技術(shù)
    The technological dilemma
    二分法思維訓(xùn)練 on the one hand…on the other hand
    正反訓(xùn)練rather
    因果關(guān)系 and so…
    Whatever the responses to modern technology, there can be no doubt that it presents contemporary society with a number of immediate problems that take the form of a traditional choice of evils, so that it is appropriate to regard them as constituting a “technological dilemma.” This is the dilemma between, on the one hand, the overdependence of life in the advanced industrial countries on technology, and, on the other hand, the threat that technology will destroy the quality of life in modern society and even endanger society itself. Technology thus confronts Western civilization with the need to make a decision, or rather, a series of decisions, about how to use the enormous power available to society constructively rather than destructively. The need to control the development of technology, and so to resolve the dilemma, by regulating its application to creative social objectives, makes it ever more necessary to define these objectives while the problems presented by rapid technological growth can still be solved. 轉(zhuǎn)貼于:托??荚嘷考試大