13.標(biāo)點(diǎn)問(wèn)題 I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet. 這是一個(gè)非常普遍的問(wèn)題！許多學(xué)生在句子中使用了太多的句號(hào)，尤其是當(dāng)他們用手寫(xiě)的時(shí)候?！?BR> 14.重復(fù)冗余 Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints. 一種意思的表述不止一次，或者某個(gè)詞語(yǔ)不必要。
15.單數(shù)/復(fù)數(shù) Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths. 單詞需要從單數(shù)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)，或者由復(fù)數(shù)變成單數(shù)?！螖?shù)可數(shù)名詞 單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞不能單獨(dú)使用，應(yīng)該將其變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)形式或者加上限定詞（a, the, my, his, her, Gary\'s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等）?！?BR> 16.拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤 主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或賓語(yǔ)有問(wèn)題 I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday. 句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)有問(wèn)題 缺少主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或賓語(yǔ)，或者這些成分重復(fù)?！?BR> 17.語(yǔ)氣與文章不符 I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out. 語(yǔ)氣與文章其他部分不相符 可能是過(guò)于正式或者太不正式。
18.代詞指代不明 If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there. 代詞所指代的指示詞（介詞所代替的名詞）不清楚?！?BR> 19.過(guò)于籠統(tǒng) We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse. 句子或它所表達(dá)的意思過(guò)于籠統(tǒng)，不能提供多少信息。
20.動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤 Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food. 動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)不正確 檢查一下是應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時(shí)、過(guò)去時(shí)、將來(lái)時(shí)還是完成時(shí)等等?！?BR> 21.選詞不恰當(dāng) I was late getting home because I lost my way. 在這種情況下不應(yīng)該使用該詞 可選擇更好的詞語(yǔ)或者所使用的詞語(yǔ)與文章的總體語(yǔ)氣不符?！?BR> 22.單詞形式不當(dāng) I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth. 所使用的單詞的形式不正確 檢查一下應(yīng)該使用該詞的名詞、形容詞或副詞形式的哪一種?！?BR> 23.用詞錯(cuò)誤 Even I don’t speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation. 用詞錯(cuò)誤或在此種情況下該詞不是用詞?！ ?BR>
15.單數(shù)/復(fù)數(shù) Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths. 單詞需要從單數(shù)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)，或者由復(fù)數(shù)變成單數(shù)?！螖?shù)可數(shù)名詞 單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞不能單獨(dú)使用，應(yīng)該將其變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)形式或者加上限定詞（a, the, my, his, her, Gary\'s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等）?！?BR> 16.拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤 主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或賓語(yǔ)有問(wèn)題 I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday. 句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)有問(wèn)題 缺少主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或賓語(yǔ)，或者這些成分重復(fù)?！?BR> 17.語(yǔ)氣與文章不符 I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out. 語(yǔ)氣與文章其他部分不相符 可能是過(guò)于正式或者太不正式。
18.代詞指代不明 If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there. 代詞所指代的指示詞（介詞所代替的名詞）不清楚?！?BR> 19.過(guò)于籠統(tǒng) We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse. 句子或它所表達(dá)的意思過(guò)于籠統(tǒng)，不能提供多少信息。
20.動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤 Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food. 動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)不正確 檢查一下是應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時(shí)、過(guò)去時(shí)、將來(lái)時(shí)還是完成時(shí)等等?！?BR> 21.選詞不恰當(dāng) I was late getting home because I lost my way. 在這種情況下不應(yīng)該使用該詞 可選擇更好的詞語(yǔ)或者所使用的詞語(yǔ)與文章的總體語(yǔ)氣不符?！?BR> 22.單詞形式不當(dāng) I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth. 所使用的單詞的形式不正確 檢查一下應(yīng)該使用該詞的名詞、形容詞或副詞形式的哪一種?！?BR> 23.用詞錯(cuò)誤 Even I don’t speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation. 用詞錯(cuò)誤或在此種情況下該詞不是用詞?！ ?BR>