托福寫作常見50個病句分析篇2

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26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
    改進: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
    27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
    改進: Cigarettes can help you relax.
    28. What’s about nonsmokers?
    改進: What about nonsmokers?
    29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
    改進: Why not be a non-smoker?
    30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
    改進: Everyone has friends in his life.
    31. I am not good at maths, but English
    改進: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
    32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?
    改進: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?
    33.It is children who clear about their interests.
    改進: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
    34. I agree the latter idea.
    改進: I agree with the latter idea.
    35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
    改進: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
    36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
    改進: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
    37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
    改進:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
    38. No one knows all the things.
    改進: No one knows everything.
    39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
    改進: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
    40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages.
    改進: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
    41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
    改進: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.
    42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
    改進: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
    43. They will learn the bad habits.
    改進: They will develop bad habits.
    44. In this continued process, people make progress.
    改進: In this cycle, people make progress.
    45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
    改進: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
    46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
    改進: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
    47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
    改進: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
    48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
    改進: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
    49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.
    改進: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.
    50. I felt alone.
    改進: I felt lonely.