It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
Knowledge gained from experience and that from books are the two major sources where people’s knowledge come from. When asked about which source is more important, the majority may choose experience. Others, however, like me, would like to vote for books, from which gaining knowledge is more efficient, widely-covered and systematic.
No one can deny the fact that acquiring knowledge from books is far more efficient than that from experience. In the time of information explosion(在信息爆炸的時代是否這樣說?), efficiency is of vital importance and everyone wants to get more information in less time. By books, we can understand a principle in a single day which may have taken the experts several years to discover(能否用discover a principle?), we can quickly go through the thousand-year-history in several hours, and we can learn about a foreign country without having been there for a minute.
Furthermore, books has another conspicuous benefit, that is its universality(廣泛性用這個詞合適嗎？). Human’s life is finite, too short to experience everything in this (此處想用一個表示“廣大”的形容詞，不知用什么合適)world. Often there are things that ordinary people cannot experience in their lives. But by reading books, which cover almost every field in this world, can provide what they want to know. For example, only few people can set foot on the moon, but we can also know the details about the moon by reading relevant books.
In addition, knowledge gained from books is more systematic. The knowledge which comes from experience is concrete, specific but often scrap(這幾個形容詞不知用得對不對，想表達(dá)“具體，有針對性，但比較零碎”), while knowledge acquired from books is more systematic and can give an abstract overview.
While it is true that in learning practical activities such as swimming, experience plays a more important role, I think that gaining knowledge from books weighs more because nowadays, we need to know things more quickly, widely, and systematically.結(jié)尾是不是再寫點什么？可是我已經(jīng)想不出來了-___-||
修改意見:
總得來說還是不錯得。
最后一段，可以寫成admittedly,
然后加上一段， to sum up, 你可以看一下模板，找找感覺。
Knowledge gained from experience and that from books are the two major sources where people’s knowledge come from. When asked about which source is more important, the majority may choose experience. Others, however, like me, would like to vote for books, from which gaining knowledge is more efficient, widely-covered and systematic.
No one can deny the fact that acquiring knowledge from books is far more efficient than that from experience. In the time of information explosion(在信息爆炸的時代是否這樣說?), efficiency is of vital importance and everyone wants to get more information in less time. By books, we can understand a principle in a single day which may have taken the experts several years to discover(能否用discover a principle?), we can quickly go through the thousand-year-history in several hours, and we can learn about a foreign country without having been there for a minute.
Furthermore, books has another conspicuous benefit, that is its universality(廣泛性用這個詞合適嗎？). Human’s life is finite, too short to experience everything in this (此處想用一個表示“廣大”的形容詞，不知用什么合適)world. Often there are things that ordinary people cannot experience in their lives. But by reading books, which cover almost every field in this world, can provide what they want to know. For example, only few people can set foot on the moon, but we can also know the details about the moon by reading relevant books.
In addition, knowledge gained from books is more systematic. The knowledge which comes from experience is concrete, specific but often scrap(這幾個形容詞不知用得對不對，想表達(dá)“具體，有針對性，但比較零碎”), while knowledge acquired from books is more systematic and can give an abstract overview.
While it is true that in learning practical activities such as swimming, experience plays a more important role, I think that gaining knowledge from books weighs more because nowadays, we need to know things more quickly, widely, and systematically.結(jié)尾是不是再寫點什么？可是我已經(jīng)想不出來了-___-||
修改意見:
總得來說還是不錯得。
最后一段，可以寫成admittedly,
然后加上一段， to sum up, 你可以看一下模板，找找感覺。