About half of the infant and maternal deaths in developing countries could be avoided if women had used family planning methods to prevent high risk ____1____pregnancies, according to a report publishing recently by the Johns Hopking ____2____University.
The report indicates that 5.6 million infant deaths and 2,000,000 maternal
Deaths could be prevented this year if women chose to have theirs children ____3____within the safest years with adequate intervals among births and limited their ____4____families to moderate size.
This amounts to about half of the 9.8 million infant and 370.000 maternal deaths in developing countries, excluded China, estimated for this year by ____5____the United Nation's Children's Fund and the US Centers for Disease Control respectably. China was excluded because very few births occur in the high ____6____risk categories.
The report says that evidences from around the world shows the risk of ____7____maternal or infant ill and death is the highest in four specific types of ____8_____pregnancy; pregnancies before the mother is 18 year old; those after the ____9____mother is 35 years old; pregnancies after four births; and those lesser than ____10____two years apart.
【答案】
1. 將had used 改為 used.
因為此句是虛擬語氣，表示與現(xiàn)在事實相反，故條件從句中應(yīng)使用一般過去時。例如：
Many would be wise if they did not think themselves wise. 許多人原本會成為聰明人－如果他們不自以為聰明的話。
2. 將publishing改為published
report和publish時邏輯動賓關(guān)系，故應(yīng)使用publish的過去分詞短語來修飾report.例如：
Any discovery that we may make, however small, will remain acquired knowledge. 任何可能的發(fā)現(xiàn)，不管多么微不足道，都將成為知識寶庫中的一部分。
3. 將theirs改為their
4. 將among改為between
在兩次懷孕期間留出足夠的間隔時間，故用between.
5 將過去分詞excluded改為介詞excluding.
excluding意為“不包括…”
6. 將respectably改為respectively
respectively 意為 “分別地 ”，符合句子的意思。而respectably意為 “可敬的，值得尊敬地 ”。
7. 將evidences改為evidence.
evidence是不可數(shù)名詞。
8. 將ill改為illness.
9. 將year改為years.
10. 將lesser改為less
The report indicates that 5.6 million infant deaths and 2,000,000 maternal
Deaths could be prevented this year if women chose to have theirs children ____3____within the safest years with adequate intervals among births and limited their ____4____families to moderate size.
This amounts to about half of the 9.8 million infant and 370.000 maternal deaths in developing countries, excluded China, estimated for this year by ____5____the United Nation's Children's Fund and the US Centers for Disease Control respectably. China was excluded because very few births occur in the high ____6____risk categories.
The report says that evidences from around the world shows the risk of ____7____maternal or infant ill and death is the highest in four specific types of ____8_____pregnancy; pregnancies before the mother is 18 year old; those after the ____9____mother is 35 years old; pregnancies after four births; and those lesser than ____10____two years apart.
【答案】
1. 將had used 改為 used.
因為此句是虛擬語氣，表示與現(xiàn)在事實相反，故條件從句中應(yīng)使用一般過去時。例如：
Many would be wise if they did not think themselves wise. 許多人原本會成為聰明人－如果他們不自以為聰明的話。
2. 將publishing改為published
report和publish時邏輯動賓關(guān)系，故應(yīng)使用publish的過去分詞短語來修飾report.例如：
Any discovery that we may make, however small, will remain acquired knowledge. 任何可能的發(fā)現(xiàn)，不管多么微不足道，都將成為知識寶庫中的一部分。
3. 將theirs改為their
4. 將among改為between
在兩次懷孕期間留出足夠的間隔時間，故用between.
5 將過去分詞excluded改為介詞excluding.
excluding意為“不包括…”
6. 將respectably改為respectively
respectively 意為 “分別地 ”，符合句子的意思。而respectably意為 “可敬的，值得尊敬地 ”。
7. 將evidences改為evidence.
evidence是不可數(shù)名詞。
8. 將ill改為illness.
9. 將year改為years.
10. 將lesser改為less