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There are far too many road accidents in this country,too many deaths and too many people injured. One wonders who are most to blame, drivers and pedestrians.__1__ Some people say that the blame cannot be put fairly with considering the state of the roads and the whole __2__ transport system. In such crowed cities London,__3__ Birmingham or Manchester, road conditions are so chaotic that both driver and pedestrian often endanger lives through no fault of their own. Such sufficiency__4__ as too many road signs, faulty traffic lights, suddenly narrowing of the streets, congested parking are all a sure indication of bad road conditions. On the other hand, many experts are convincing that the larger__5__ part of the blame for the death toll must be put on persons alone: Drivers who drive too fast and without any consideration for others; drivers who think they are safe at the wheel as though they have drunk too__6__ much alcohol; drivers, who out of some curious sense of power, are incapable of understanding that their car is a lethal weapon if is improperly used. Pedestrians, __7__ likewise, must share the guilt-stepping off the pavement without first looking to the left or right,crossing roads when the traffic lights are for them,__8__ jump off a moving bus. To be fair, pedestrians, drivers__9__ and road conditions are all to blame. One looks forward to the day when the motor-car has been replaced by some more dangerous means of transport.__10__
    【答案】
    1. and—or.根據(jù)上下文One wonders who are most to blame這一疑問(wèn),drivers和pedestrians其中之一需負(fù)責(zé)任
    2. with—without.without引導(dǎo)一個(gè)條件狀語(yǔ)從句:“如果不考慮路況和整個(gè)交通體系的話(huà)”
    3. 在London前加as.such……as結(jié)構(gòu)
    4.sufficiency—deficiencies.deficiencies意義為一些“不足,缺陷”,下文列舉的too many road signs, faulty traffic lights, suddenly narrowing of the streets, congested parking都是路況的不足和缺陷
    5. convincing—convinced.下文that從句后列舉司機(jī)和行人種種的考試大違規(guī)的行為不得不使人信服(convinced)the larger part of the blame for the death toll must be put on persons alone
    6. as—even或刪除as.as though引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句;even though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句,意義為“即使”,此處是“有些司機(jī)即使喝了很多酒,他們?nèi)匀徽J(rèn)為自己能夠把握住方向盤(pán)”
    7. 去掉is或在is前加it.根據(jù)語(yǔ)法規(guī)則,考試大有些表示時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、條件、方式或讓步狀語(yǔ)從句,如果謂語(yǔ)包含有動(dòng)詞be,主語(yǔ)又和主語(yǔ)的主語(yǔ)一致,那么常??梢园褟木渲械闹髡Z(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)部分,特別是動(dòng)詞be省略掉
    8. for—against.步行者應(yīng)該承擔(dān)責(zé)任的原因之一為交通信號(hào)燈不讓他們穿越馬路時(shí)他們卻穿馬路了
    9. jump—jumping.jumping與上文的stepping off,crossing 并列和一致,應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞
    10. more—less.從上下文邏輯和意義判斷 轉(zhuǎn)貼于:TEM考試_考試大「責(zé)編:pyy 糾錯(cuò)」