【題目】
It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.
【范文】
A New High School in the Community
Education is a top priority for every society, and the better the educational facilities are, the more likely it is that students will succeed. Their success will in turn be of benefit to the society as a whole. Because I support investment in education, I would welcome a new high school in my community. Furthermore, I believe a high school would benefit the community in the following ways.
First, the students who live in my community would no longer have to travel very far to attend school. This would save them a great deal of time, which they could then spend studying, relaxing, or helping their families. Second, with a redistribution of students between the school they used to go to and the new high school, both schools would be less crowded. This would enable students to receive more personal attention and a higher quality of education. Third, a high school can offer many advantages to the community as a whole. Residents may use some of its facilities, such as the sports ground, or attend concerts and other events in the auditorium.
In conclusion, I believe that a new high school would benefit any community. It would help not only the students and their families, but also other residents of the neighborhood. Therefore, I would wholeheartedly support the building of a new high school in my neighborhood.
在社區(qū)里興建新的高中
對(duì)每個(gè)社會(huì)來(lái)說(shuō)，教育都是先考慮的事，而且教育設(shè)施越好，學(xué)生就越有可能成功，而他們的成功對(duì)社會(huì)整體而言必然是有利的。因?yàn)槲抑С滞顿Y教育，所以我會(huì)歡迎在我的社區(qū)內(nèi)興建新的高中。此外，我認(rèn)為一所高中會(huì)在以下幾個(gè)方面對(duì)社區(qū)有利。
第一，住在社區(qū)里的學(xué)生不需要再到很遠(yuǎn)的地方上學(xué)。這將會(huì)給他們節(jié)省很多時(shí)間，而他們可以用這些時(shí)間讀書(shū)、放松，或給家人幫忙。第二，由于他們以前就讀的學(xué)校和新學(xué)校之間的學(xué)生會(huì)重新分配，這兩所學(xué)校將不再那么擁擠，這會(huì)讓學(xué)生能夠得到更多的個(gè)人關(guān)注和質(zhì)量較高的教育。第三，整體而言，興建一所高中可以提供給社區(qū)很多好處。居民可以使用學(xué)校的設(shè)施，如運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)，或是在禮堂參加音樂(lè)會(huì)或其他活動(dòng)。
總之，我認(rèn)為新的高中對(duì)任何社區(qū)都有利。它不但可以使學(xué)生及其家人獲益，還可惠及鄰近地區(qū)的居民。因此，我由衷地支持在我們住家附近興建新的高中。
【注釋】
community n.社區(qū)
priorty n.優(yōu)先的事
facilities n. (pl.)設(shè)施
in turn必然地
as a whole整體而言
investment n.投資
furthermore adv.此外
benefit v.使獲益
travel v.前進(jìn)
a great deal of大量的
redistribution n.重新分配
used to以前
crowded adj.擁擠的
quality n.品質(zhì)
advantage n.優(yōu)點(diǎn)
resident n.居民
It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.
【范文】
A New High School in the Community
Education is a top priority for every society, and the better the educational facilities are, the more likely it is that students will succeed. Their success will in turn be of benefit to the society as a whole. Because I support investment in education, I would welcome a new high school in my community. Furthermore, I believe a high school would benefit the community in the following ways.
First, the students who live in my community would no longer have to travel very far to attend school. This would save them a great deal of time, which they could then spend studying, relaxing, or helping their families. Second, with a redistribution of students between the school they used to go to and the new high school, both schools would be less crowded. This would enable students to receive more personal attention and a higher quality of education. Third, a high school can offer many advantages to the community as a whole. Residents may use some of its facilities, such as the sports ground, or attend concerts and other events in the auditorium.
In conclusion, I believe that a new high school would benefit any community. It would help not only the students and their families, but also other residents of the neighborhood. Therefore, I would wholeheartedly support the building of a new high school in my neighborhood.
在社區(qū)里興建新的高中
對(duì)每個(gè)社會(huì)來(lái)說(shuō)，教育都是先考慮的事，而且教育設(shè)施越好，學(xué)生就越有可能成功，而他們的成功對(duì)社會(huì)整體而言必然是有利的。因?yàn)槲抑С滞顿Y教育，所以我會(huì)歡迎在我的社區(qū)內(nèi)興建新的高中。此外，我認(rèn)為一所高中會(huì)在以下幾個(gè)方面對(duì)社區(qū)有利。
第一，住在社區(qū)里的學(xué)生不需要再到很遠(yuǎn)的地方上學(xué)。這將會(huì)給他們節(jié)省很多時(shí)間，而他們可以用這些時(shí)間讀書(shū)、放松，或給家人幫忙。第二，由于他們以前就讀的學(xué)校和新學(xué)校之間的學(xué)生會(huì)重新分配，這兩所學(xué)校將不再那么擁擠，這會(huì)讓學(xué)生能夠得到更多的個(gè)人關(guān)注和質(zhì)量較高的教育。第三，整體而言，興建一所高中可以提供給社區(qū)很多好處。居民可以使用學(xué)校的設(shè)施，如運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)，或是在禮堂參加音樂(lè)會(huì)或其他活動(dòng)。
總之，我認(rèn)為新的高中對(duì)任何社區(qū)都有利。它不但可以使學(xué)生及其家人獲益，還可惠及鄰近地區(qū)的居民。因此，我由衷地支持在我們住家附近興建新的高中。
【注釋】
community n.社區(qū)
priorty n.優(yōu)先的事
facilities n. (pl.)設(shè)施
in turn必然地
as a whole整體而言
investment n.投資
furthermore adv.此外
benefit v.使獲益
travel v.前進(jìn)
a great deal of大量的
redistribution n.重新分配
used to以前
crowded adj.擁擠的
quality n.品質(zhì)
advantage n.優(yōu)點(diǎn)
resident n.居民