題目：Some people think that a new language should be invented for people from different countries to use for the international communication. To what extent do you think its advantages far outweigh its disadvantages?
其實(shí)這篇并不怪啊，就相當(dāng)于我發(fā)的講義的重點(diǎn)題目第一題，一種全球化的語言?！?BR> In the contemporary world, globalization is making a large incidence around the world. The issue of invented a fresh language is an emotional one, with some people talking the attitude that is necessary to contrive a new language for people from different countries to use for the international communication.
The reason for this trend may involve the recognition that different language may cause dispensable trouble, even lead to a war and also restricted people who can only use their mother tongue to communicate with external people. By contrast, those who can use foreign language to get a high-paid career and immigrate to other countries have a high quality life. They tend to be more enlighten may to they broader view. Admittedly, having ability to communicate with people who has different culture background is increasingly remarkable. So, invented a new language may bring numerous benefits to not only a person, but countries from all over the world.
第一個(gè)立論段落的問題：主題句涵蓋太多內(nèi)容，太寬泛，變成幾乎沒有主題句
However, a great language frequently link to a variety of culture. Furthermore, originate a new language is a long-term evolution like Chinese. Classical Chinese is the beginning of Chinese which is throughout 5000 years of history and gradually evolve to modern language called Modern Vernacular Chinese. During that time, Chinese shaped a colorful culture which is magnificent at present. But, current science and technology is become increasing advancing. Scientist may totally create a new language which is combine diversity of culture.
這段的論述有點(diǎn)離題了
Overall, despite of creating a language may during a long-term period. But, modern technology can reduce that period and eventually contrive a new language. Speaking myself, its benefits are significant contributing factors to the development of world.
給你一點(diǎn)論據(jù)：
支持：
1.個(gè)人生活，學(xué)習(xí)，工作帶來方便
2.促進(jìn)世界的經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，國與國的溝通，社會(huì)進(jìn)步
不支持：
1.造成很多小語種和少數(shù)民族文化的消失
2.造成世界的uniformity,使人們的生活變的dull或monotonous
其實(shí)這篇并不怪啊，就相當(dāng)于我發(fā)的講義的重點(diǎn)題目第一題，一種全球化的語言?！?BR> In the contemporary world, globalization is making a large incidence around the world. The issue of invented a fresh language is an emotional one, with some people talking the attitude that is necessary to contrive a new language for people from different countries to use for the international communication.
The reason for this trend may involve the recognition that different language may cause dispensable trouble, even lead to a war and also restricted people who can only use their mother tongue to communicate with external people. By contrast, those who can use foreign language to get a high-paid career and immigrate to other countries have a high quality life. They tend to be more enlighten may to they broader view. Admittedly, having ability to communicate with people who has different culture background is increasingly remarkable. So, invented a new language may bring numerous benefits to not only a person, but countries from all over the world.
第一個(gè)立論段落的問題：主題句涵蓋太多內(nèi)容，太寬泛，變成幾乎沒有主題句
However, a great language frequently link to a variety of culture. Furthermore, originate a new language is a long-term evolution like Chinese. Classical Chinese is the beginning of Chinese which is throughout 5000 years of history and gradually evolve to modern language called Modern Vernacular Chinese. During that time, Chinese shaped a colorful culture which is magnificent at present. But, current science and technology is become increasing advancing. Scientist may totally create a new language which is combine diversity of culture.
這段的論述有點(diǎn)離題了
Overall, despite of creating a language may during a long-term period. But, modern technology can reduce that period and eventually contrive a new language. Speaking myself, its benefits are significant contributing factors to the development of world.
給你一點(diǎn)論據(jù)：
支持：
1.個(gè)人生活，學(xué)習(xí)，工作帶來方便
2.促進(jìn)世界的經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，國與國的溝通，社會(huì)進(jìn)步
不支持：
1.造成很多小語種和少數(shù)民族文化的消失
2.造成世界的uniformity,使人們的生活變的dull或monotonous