考前寫作急訓(xùn)(11)

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10、There be 句型的誤用
    There exists some new problems such as being dishonest. (誤)There exist/arise some new problems such as being dishonest. (正)
    There are many way to solve the tuition and fees of college education. (誤)There are many ways to raise the money for the tuition and fees for college education.
    (正)
    11、動賓搭配不當(dāng)
    We must pay attention to it and make solutions to the problem. (誤)We must pay attention and find a solution to the problem. (正)
    It also may help you to make success. (誤)It may also help you succeed/obtain your goal. (正)
    12、根據(jù)中文逐字硬譯
    If someone's family situation is not well, he can apply for loan to bank. (誤)If one's family is not well off, he can apply to the bank for a loan. (正)
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    Let alone touch the outside world of campus/keep a good body health(誤)Let alone get in touch with the world outside of the campus/keep fit(正)上面這些錯誤比較典型、集中,請大家務(wù)必要注意,其他的錯誤,如單詞拼寫、大小
    寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號的誤用等,可謂千姿百態(tài),無奇不有,在此就不一一列舉。
    六、常用句型
    (一)關(guān)于利弊、優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)的句型:(Some sentence patterns commonly-used in controlled writing: )
    1. S+have (or has) a lot of advantages over…(與…相比有許多優(yōu)點(diǎn)) Compared with B, A has (or have) many advantages. 譯:1)澳大利亞與中國相比,其優(yōu)點(diǎn)是人口少。 2)英語好是她的長處。She has the advantage of good English.
    2. be of great benefit to sb./sth. ( 對…有益) 譯:你的計算機(jī)知識對你將來的工作十分有利。3. …benefit sb./sth. ( 對…有好處) 譯:這家新醫(yī)院對整個社區(qū)有利。Benefit from sth. ( 由于…而受益) 譯:我們將從技術(shù)發(fā)明中受益。4. …do (a lot of) good to sb. ( 對…有許多好處) 譯:早晨鍛煉對你很有好處?!璪e good for sb./sth. (對…有益) 譯:蔬菜和水果有利人的健康?!璬o damage to sth. (對…造成損壞) 譯:這次地震對城市建筑損壞嚴(yán)重。5. …be as (not so) good as…, What he does is not so good as what he says. 6. …not so much…as…(與其說…, 不如說…。) 譯:人口的迅速增長與其說是由于出生率年升還不如說是由于死亡率的下降。7. It benefits us in many ways/respects. 8. Doing sth. is beneficial to… 1. While…h(huán)as so many advantages, we should not ignore the problems it brings us. 2. Just as a coin has two sides, everything has its advantages and disadvantages. (二)說明原因的句型:
    two
    for…
    1. There are some good reasons to…
    many