GMAT新黃金80題及作文范文(十七)(1)

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114. The following appeared in a memorandum from the director of research and development at Ready-to-Ware, a software engineering firm.
    “The package of benefits and incentives that Ready-to-Ware offers to professional staff is too costly. Our quarterly profits have declined since the package was introduced two years ago, at the time of our incorporation. Moreover, the package had little positive effect, as we have had only marginal success in recruiting and training high-quality professional staff. To become more profitable again, Ready-to-Ware should, therefore, offer the reduced benefits package that was in place two years ago and use the savings to fund our current research and development initiatives.”
    一家軟件工程公司,Ready-to-Ware的研發(fā)經(jīng)理的備忘錄:
    RW給專業(yè)人員的利益和激勵機制太昂貴了。自從兩年前我們組成公司時機制引入,我們的利潤下降了1/4,而且,這個機制基本上沒有效果,因為我們在招募和訓(xùn)練高水平專業(yè)人員方面只獲得邊際(marginal?)成功。為了再次得到更多的利潤,RW應(yīng)該提供兩年前使用的較低的激勵機制,并把節(jié)余用于研發(fā)的開展。
    1. The causal relationship between the benefit package given to the professional staff and the decline of the profit is not guaranteed by the coincidence that the latter occured just after the latter. Other factors that may contribute to the decline in the profit should also be considered and ruled out.
    2. Research and development is a time-consuming process. Two years is not a long enough period to see the result and positive effects.
    3. Even if the package is really too high and caused the declne of profit, it is still imprudent to say that the reduced benefits package that was in place two years ago will definitely work.
    1. 同時發(fā)生并不代表因果,忽略他因
    2. 沒有提供信息,不知道如果不提供這些會不會得到成功培訓(xùn)
    3. 即使是省下錢,也不知是否科研,因為可能因為其他原因?qū)е碌睦麧櫹陆怠?BR>    In this memorandum the director of research and development of Ready-to-Ware recommends reducing the benefits package offered to employees as a means of increasing profits and funding current research and development initiatives. The director’s line of reasoning is that quarterly profits have declined because of the current benefits package and can be increased by reducing it. Moreover, the director argues that the benefits package had little effect in recruiting and training high-quality employees. The director’s argument is questionable for several reasons.
    To begin with, the director’s reasoning is a classic instance of “after this, therefore because of this” reasoning. The only evidence put forward to support the claim that the introduction of the benefits package is responsible for the decline in quarterly profits is that the profits declined after the package was introduced. However, this evidence is insufficient to establish the causal claim in question. Many other factors could bring about the same result. For example, the company may have failed to keep pace with competitors in introducing new products or may have failed to satisfy its customers by providing adequate support services. Until these and other possible factors are ruled out, it is premature to conclude that the introduction of the benefits package was the cause of the decline in profits.
    Next, the director assumes that the benefits package currently offered is responsible for the marginal success Ready-to-Ware has experienced in recruiting and training new high-quality professionals. However, no evidence is offered to support this allegation. Other reasons for Ready-to-Ware’s failure to attract high-quality professionals are not considered. For example, perhaps Ready-to-Ware is not a cutting edge company or is not regarded as a leader in its field. Until these and other possible explanations of the company’s marginal success at recruiting and training employees are examined and eliminated it is folly to conclude that the benefits package provided to the professional staff is responsible.
    In conclusion, the director has failed to provide convincing reasons for reducing the benefits package Ready-to-Ware currently offers its professional staff. To further support the recommendation the director would have to examine and eliminate other possible reasons for the decline in Ready-to-Ware’s quarterly profits and for its lack of success in attracting high-quality professionals.