商務(wù)信函的英文書寫規(guī)則(5)2

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f) You must cut off your order in half
     We would suggest that you cut your order in half.
    g) We have not yet had your reply.
     It appears that we have not yet had your reply.
    (四) 運(yùn)用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)氣
    有時(shí),運(yùn)用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)氣,比主動(dòng)語(yǔ)氣客氣,如:
    a) You made a very careless mistake.
     A very careless mistake was made
    b) You did not enclose the check with your order.
     The check was not enclosed with your order.
    c) For the past two years, you did not give us any order.
     For the past two years, no order has been given us. Or:
     For the past two years, no business has been materialized between us.
    (五) 避免(或力爭(zhēng)避免)使用語(yǔ)氣強(qiáng)烈或容易引起不快的詞匯
    a) we demand immediate payment from you
    demand的意思是ask for(sth) as if ordering, or as if one has a right to, 即帶有命令意味的要求。應(yīng)盡可能避免使用demand而改用request如:
    We request your immediate payment.
    b) We are disgusted with your manner of doing business.
    disguste意味hate而且有strong feeling of dislike or distasted, 既“厭惡”的意思, 因此,還是婉轉(zhuǎn)或含蓄一些為宜,如:
    We are not completely satisfied with your manner of doing business.
    c) We must refuse your offer.
    Must………帶有威脅性的意味(minatory tone),不如改為:
    We regret that we are unable to accept your offer.
    Or: We regret that we are not in a position to accept your offer.
    d) We want you to assist us
    帶有傲慢或長(zhǎng)者的口吻(superior tone),不如改為:
    Your assistance would be appreciated.
    (六) 使用高興,遺憾,感謝等詞匯及表達(dá)法
     (1)、 We have pleasure of -ing…….
     We have pleasure in -ing…….
     It is with pleasure that we do so
     It gives us(great, much) pleasure to do so
     We are pleased for us to do so
     It’’s a pleasure for us to do so.
     We are glad(or: delighted) that you do so
     We shall gladly do so
     We shall feel happy if you will do so
     We are happy to do so
     (2) 、表示感謝的表達(dá)法有:
    We are (very, most) appreciative of your doing so
    We are gratified to learn that you do so
    We shall be (or: feel) obliged by your doing so
    We shall be obliged if you will do so
    You will oblige us by doing so
    We shall be grateful to you if you will do so