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對(duì)6分范文和pp3上相關(guān)策略的分析
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看官如果覺得有問題或分析的好請(qǐng)跟貼說明。
題目:
"The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things."
對(duì)題目的分析:
Because this claim about the origin of "the best ideas" is very broad, you will need to think about how to focus your analysis with respect to the three key phrases of the claim. You might begin by considering each key phrase and its relationship to the other two.大家請(qǐng)注意its relationship to the other two這點(diǎn)對(duì)中國(guó)考生是難點(diǎn)，也是大家習(xí)慣忽略的問題。請(qǐng)注意看以下三點(diǎn)(也就是issue題目傳遞給你需要你重點(diǎn)考慮的信息)：
1：
Best ideas -- What kind of ideas can be identified as "the best"? Do they have different characteristics in different fields, such as science, politics, education, and art?看到后面的：science, politics, education, and art沒有？對(duì)了，這幾個(gè)方面只要你有想到，那你的issue就很有普遍性了(ets很喜歡有代表性的，普遍性的東西喲)，在以后大家對(duì)issue的論述一定要想到：這個(gè)問題在science(academic fields), politics, education, art, and normal(custom and value)會(huì)有什么作用，有什么差別等等。還有一點(diǎn)：這種best極端的詞出現(xiàn)在題目里要好好想想，only出現(xiàn)時(shí)也一樣。
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Passionate interest -- What is the relationship between "passionate interest" and quality of ideas?好的，知道這個(gè)issue的complexity在哪里了吧(通常issue都會(huì)涉及到幾個(gè)概念的關(guān)系，而這個(gè)關(guān)系恰恰就是重點(diǎn)，需要仔細(xì)揣摩的，大家千萬(wàn)要好好練習(xí)這方面的論述喲。)Could a thorough and careful program of investigation be evidence of a "passionate interest"?看到嗎?連在ets的題目分析里，你也可以學(xué)到很多東西，如舉例論證加疑問句。Note that the claim is not that a passionate interest always gives rise to ideas that are among the best, but that the best ideas always derive from a passionate interest in something.喲，這里有點(diǎn)充分非必要條件的味道。大家看看。The best ideas來(lái)自passionate interest.但是passionate interest不一定可以帶來(lái)the best ideas.大家要小心這點(diǎn)喲。
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Commonplace things -- What is the relationship between interest in "commonplace things" and the best ideas?這點(diǎn)比較容易想得到。How closely connected to commonplace things are the most important ideas? Are ideas about ordinary things important because they are widely applicable, or are some very abstract ideas important because they express fundamental truths about commonplace things?這里強(qiáng)調(diào)了原因，不容易考慮到。讓我們來(lái)看看這個(gè)原因有什么用(看范文)。好的，如果你看到這個(gè)題目，可以做出以上分析，那你對(duì)于一般的issue題目在理解上就沒多大問題了，當(dāng)然，這個(gè)題目有點(diǎn)簡(jiǎn)單。呵呵。Now you are in a strong position to organize your thoughts and decide if the reasons and examples you've identified support the claim as stated, support an opposing point of view, or support a position that qualifies or redefines the claim in some way.看到?jīng)]有，你的文章可以論述的角度被給出了。記?。喝魏蝘ssue，要有鮮明的position是第一重要的，對(duì)中國(guó)學(xué)生來(lái)說(中國(guó)考生issue一般都比較水，所以要先讓別人看懂) Remember that you are free to take and develop any position you wish, so long as you consider the complexities of the issue and use relevant reasons and/or examples看到or沒有？這里我不反對(duì)多舉例子的論證方式。但是，你的例子一定要詳細(xì)一點(diǎn)(說出原因和過程來(lái)，別光說什么是什么樣的就說明了觀點(diǎn)，記?。耗闶褂煤美邮且フf服別人，而不是簡(jiǎn)單的告訴別人這個(gè)東西是這樣的。在你論述原因和過程的同時(shí)就已經(jīng)把reason包括進(jìn)去了)。to support your views.
6分范文：
Even the most brilliant thinkers, from Socrates to Satre,很有代表性的例子live lives in time. A childhood, an adolescence, an adulthood; these are common to me and you as well as the greatest writers. Furthermore, many of the great thinkers we esteem in our Western culture lived somewhat unevetful lives. What distinguished their life from say a common laborer was their work. Therefore, what provided the grist for their work?反問方式提出主題，多有邏輯啊，漂亮的很。很難學(xué)，悠著點(diǎn)。One might say that they were brilliant and this alone was sufficient to distinguish their lives from the masses.記住，這是一種論證方式喲，先介紹一種反方觀點(diǎn)，在反駁它來(lái)引出自己的觀點(diǎn)或是加強(qiáng)自己的觀點(diǎn)。Intellect alone can not devise situations or thoughts from no where; there must be a basis and that basis is most common,呵呵，這不是出來(lái)了，greatest和common的聯(lián)系嗎？if not always, observation of the common, of the quotidian. Critics of this idea may argue that these thinkers were products of fine educations and were well schooled in the classics.這部又來(lái)了一種反方觀點(diǎn)，再駁斥嗎？值得學(xué)習(xí)呀。This, they may point to, is the real basis for their knowledge. I would agrue that although it may be a benefit to study classics and be well schooled in diverse disciplines, these pursuits merely refine and hone an ability each and every person has, the ability to study human nature.這個(gè)human nature不就是最最common的嗎？Where best to study human nature than in the day to day routine each one of us can witness in him or herself or those around us.這里要說的是，這個(gè)可不是簡(jiǎn)單的開頭，人家在介紹背景的同時(shí)，反駁了兩種觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)應(yīng)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。在這個(gè)過程中，作者很有目地的覆蓋了the complexity of this issue，請(qǐng)大家好好體會(huì)。當(dāng)然，美中不足的是，他沒有考慮the passionate interests.
I propose that the two best disciplines to understand this power of the commonplace and its ability to cause a groundswell of thought are philosophy and literature.有代表性吧？看看人家是怎么舉例子的，再比較一下自己那些干巴巴的例子，看出差距了吧。Every school of philosophy, from the Greeks to our day, share a common注意common喲mission or intent and that is to understand and explain human existence, with all of its concommitant features. Generally speaking, the Greek philosophers, epitomized in Aristotle, attempted to set down rules for human behavior founded on logic. These rules applied not only to the rare forms of human behavior but largely focused on the more mundane motions of daily life.很具體喲。Many of Aristotle's rules were based on his observations of others as well as himself.主題出來(lái)了Contrast this venture with the existentialists of our century who attempted to look behind the real motivations of human behavior as well understand man's relation to the Universe. To do this, what did these philosophers do? They studied those around them;看主題出來(lái)吧，great idea的基礎(chǔ)都是common places啊。they submerged themselves in the commonplace, in cities with hordes of annonymous people. While the existentialists, as well those philosophers before, exploited their uncommon eduation and intellect,順便又反駁一下反方觀點(diǎn)，主體太集中了，羨慕，嫉妒the basis for their movement was ordinary human behavior and existence.看，舉例子的過程就是論證的過程，好好感受6分作文的魅力吧。
Finally, literature is similar to philosophy in that it seeks to explain and understand human behavior and therefore rooted in the commonplace.例子間都有比較，太難，不提倡。Nevertheless, its relative strength over philosophy is literature's ability to emotionally and spiritually move the reader through the use of contrived situations and fictional characters. It can do this when even the central theme of a piece maybe love between a man and a woman (e.g.commonplace).哦，love多有代表性啊，誰(shuí)都需要love，呵呵Literature also distinguishes itself from philosophy in that the breadth of the fiction may be huge. The plot and the detail can be quite ordinary or fanatastic. However, this does not mean that the central themes of all literature, whether ordinary or fantastic, deal with human beings and the problems they find in the world, something which we all share.很累了，就分析到這吧，這段希望大家補(bǔ)充。
In conclusion, I hope it has been shown that a passionate desire to understand and explain human behavior, the significance of our existence and deal constructively with the challanges of life are the centerpieces of at least in two of the most influential areas in human thought.結(jié)尾樸實(shí)無(wú)華，值得學(xué)習(xí)What is more commonplace than the existence of man.
對(duì)6分范文和pp3上相關(guān)策略的分析
希望對(duì)大家的準(zhǔn)備有用.
看官如果覺得有問題或分析的好請(qǐng)跟貼說明。
題目:
"The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things."
對(duì)題目的分析:
Because this claim about the origin of "the best ideas" is very broad, you will need to think about how to focus your analysis with respect to the three key phrases of the claim. You might begin by considering each key phrase and its relationship to the other two.大家請(qǐng)注意its relationship to the other two這點(diǎn)對(duì)中國(guó)考生是難點(diǎn)，也是大家習(xí)慣忽略的問題。請(qǐng)注意看以下三點(diǎn)(也就是issue題目傳遞給你需要你重點(diǎn)考慮的信息)：
1：
Best ideas -- What kind of ideas can be identified as "the best"? Do they have different characteristics in different fields, such as science, politics, education, and art?看到后面的：science, politics, education, and art沒有？對(duì)了，這幾個(gè)方面只要你有想到，那你的issue就很有普遍性了(ets很喜歡有代表性的，普遍性的東西喲)，在以后大家對(duì)issue的論述一定要想到：這個(gè)問題在science(academic fields), politics, education, art, and normal(custom and value)會(huì)有什么作用，有什么差別等等。還有一點(diǎn)：這種best極端的詞出現(xiàn)在題目里要好好想想，only出現(xiàn)時(shí)也一樣。
2：
Passionate interest -- What is the relationship between "passionate interest" and quality of ideas?好的，知道這個(gè)issue的complexity在哪里了吧(通常issue都會(huì)涉及到幾個(gè)概念的關(guān)系，而這個(gè)關(guān)系恰恰就是重點(diǎn)，需要仔細(xì)揣摩的，大家千萬(wàn)要好好練習(xí)這方面的論述喲。)Could a thorough and careful program of investigation be evidence of a "passionate interest"?看到嗎?連在ets的題目分析里，你也可以學(xué)到很多東西，如舉例論證加疑問句。Note that the claim is not that a passionate interest always gives rise to ideas that are among the best, but that the best ideas always derive from a passionate interest in something.喲，這里有點(diǎn)充分非必要條件的味道。大家看看。The best ideas來(lái)自passionate interest.但是passionate interest不一定可以帶來(lái)the best ideas.大家要小心這點(diǎn)喲。
3：
Commonplace things -- What is the relationship between interest in "commonplace things" and the best ideas?這點(diǎn)比較容易想得到。How closely connected to commonplace things are the most important ideas? Are ideas about ordinary things important because they are widely applicable, or are some very abstract ideas important because they express fundamental truths about commonplace things?這里強(qiáng)調(diào)了原因，不容易考慮到。讓我們來(lái)看看這個(gè)原因有什么用(看范文)。好的，如果你看到這個(gè)題目，可以做出以上分析，那你對(duì)于一般的issue題目在理解上就沒多大問題了，當(dāng)然，這個(gè)題目有點(diǎn)簡(jiǎn)單。呵呵。Now you are in a strong position to organize your thoughts and decide if the reasons and examples you've identified support the claim as stated, support an opposing point of view, or support a position that qualifies or redefines the claim in some way.看到?jīng)]有，你的文章可以論述的角度被給出了。記?。喝魏蝘ssue，要有鮮明的position是第一重要的，對(duì)中國(guó)學(xué)生來(lái)說(中國(guó)考生issue一般都比較水，所以要先讓別人看懂) Remember that you are free to take and develop any position you wish, so long as you consider the complexities of the issue and use relevant reasons and/or examples看到or沒有？這里我不反對(duì)多舉例子的論證方式。但是，你的例子一定要詳細(xì)一點(diǎn)(說出原因和過程來(lái)，別光說什么是什么樣的就說明了觀點(diǎn)，記?。耗闶褂煤美邮且フf服別人，而不是簡(jiǎn)單的告訴別人這個(gè)東西是這樣的。在你論述原因和過程的同時(shí)就已經(jīng)把reason包括進(jìn)去了)。to support your views.
6分范文：
Even the most brilliant thinkers, from Socrates to Satre,很有代表性的例子live lives in time. A childhood, an adolescence, an adulthood; these are common to me and you as well as the greatest writers. Furthermore, many of the great thinkers we esteem in our Western culture lived somewhat unevetful lives. What distinguished their life from say a common laborer was their work. Therefore, what provided the grist for their work?反問方式提出主題，多有邏輯啊，漂亮的很。很難學(xué)，悠著點(diǎn)。One might say that they were brilliant and this alone was sufficient to distinguish their lives from the masses.記住，這是一種論證方式喲，先介紹一種反方觀點(diǎn)，在反駁它來(lái)引出自己的觀點(diǎn)或是加強(qiáng)自己的觀點(diǎn)。Intellect alone can not devise situations or thoughts from no where; there must be a basis and that basis is most common,呵呵，這不是出來(lái)了，greatest和common的聯(lián)系嗎？if not always, observation of the common, of the quotidian. Critics of this idea may argue that these thinkers were products of fine educations and were well schooled in the classics.這部又來(lái)了一種反方觀點(diǎn)，再駁斥嗎？值得學(xué)習(xí)呀。This, they may point to, is the real basis for their knowledge. I would agrue that although it may be a benefit to study classics and be well schooled in diverse disciplines, these pursuits merely refine and hone an ability each and every person has, the ability to study human nature.這個(gè)human nature不就是最最common的嗎？Where best to study human nature than in the day to day routine each one of us can witness in him or herself or those around us.這里要說的是，這個(gè)可不是簡(jiǎn)單的開頭，人家在介紹背景的同時(shí)，反駁了兩種觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)應(yīng)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。在這個(gè)過程中，作者很有目地的覆蓋了the complexity of this issue，請(qǐng)大家好好體會(huì)。當(dāng)然，美中不足的是，他沒有考慮the passionate interests.
I propose that the two best disciplines to understand this power of the commonplace and its ability to cause a groundswell of thought are philosophy and literature.有代表性吧？看看人家是怎么舉例子的，再比較一下自己那些干巴巴的例子，看出差距了吧。Every school of philosophy, from the Greeks to our day, share a common注意common喲mission or intent and that is to understand and explain human existence, with all of its concommitant features. Generally speaking, the Greek philosophers, epitomized in Aristotle, attempted to set down rules for human behavior founded on logic. These rules applied not only to the rare forms of human behavior but largely focused on the more mundane motions of daily life.很具體喲。Many of Aristotle's rules were based on his observations of others as well as himself.主題出來(lái)了Contrast this venture with the existentialists of our century who attempted to look behind the real motivations of human behavior as well understand man's relation to the Universe. To do this, what did these philosophers do? They studied those around them;看主題出來(lái)吧，great idea的基礎(chǔ)都是common places啊。they submerged themselves in the commonplace, in cities with hordes of annonymous people. While the existentialists, as well those philosophers before, exploited their uncommon eduation and intellect,順便又反駁一下反方觀點(diǎn)，主體太集中了，羨慕，嫉妒the basis for their movement was ordinary human behavior and existence.看，舉例子的過程就是論證的過程，好好感受6分作文的魅力吧。
Finally, literature is similar to philosophy in that it seeks to explain and understand human behavior and therefore rooted in the commonplace.例子間都有比較，太難，不提倡。Nevertheless, its relative strength over philosophy is literature's ability to emotionally and spiritually move the reader through the use of contrived situations and fictional characters. It can do this when even the central theme of a piece maybe love between a man and a woman (e.g.commonplace).哦，love多有代表性啊，誰(shuí)都需要love，呵呵Literature also distinguishes itself from philosophy in that the breadth of the fiction may be huge. The plot and the detail can be quite ordinary or fanatastic. However, this does not mean that the central themes of all literature, whether ordinary or fantastic, deal with human beings and the problems they find in the world, something which we all share.很累了，就分析到這吧，這段希望大家補(bǔ)充。
In conclusion, I hope it has been shown that a passionate desire to understand and explain human behavior, the significance of our existence and deal constructively with the challanges of life are the centerpieces of at least in two of the most influential areas in human thought.結(jié)尾樸實(shí)無(wú)華，值得學(xué)習(xí)What is more commonplace than the existence of man.