The Celebration of Western Festivals
1、現(xiàn)在國(guó)內(nèi)不少人喜歡過(guò)西方的一些節(jié)日
2、產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因
3、這種現(xiàn)象可能帶來(lái)的影響
Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that they prefer enjoying western festivals, such as the coming X’mas. There is a general discussion today about this issue. Certainly, this is a delicious sign of diversity in the life.
A lot of reasons are responsible for it. To begin with, the young men are exposed to the international minds or trends, and they are partly influenced. What’s more, the western views have been spread widely, naturally, and culturally. Moreover, nowadays people have their rights to have a taste of various cultures. In other words, they may celebrate festivals they like besides the conventional days, like the Spring Festival.
Obviously, this does some effects in our life. For example, it will arouse anxiety among so-called protectors of tradition. They unnecessarily worries that the western days are to replace the Chinese convention. Personally speaking, the policy of “l(fā)et it be” will do more good that harm in this field. However, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the negative effects of both traditional and western days.
該樣文盡管有些不夠妥帖的地方，但中心突出（段首是中心），層次分明（邏輯詞的應(yīng)用），語(yǔ)言變化多（近意表達(dá)，副詞，短語(yǔ)，并列，被動(dòng)等等），無(wú)重大語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。
本次作文，如大多推測(cè)，原因現(xiàn)象類(lèi)。寫(xiě)法：“中心句＋1、2、3”模式。即，把提綱變?yōu)橐驗(yàn)?，以中心句體現(xiàn)在每段第一句，后面是分支觀點(diǎn)，第一……；第二……；第三……。所以從構(gòu)思上不用費(fèi)力。另外，英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)是外語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)考試，考查的重點(diǎn)是語(yǔ)言，所以思維是否很合理或獨(dú)特?zé)o關(guān)緊要。當(dāng)考生能簡(jiǎn)化其構(gòu)思時(shí)，將更有利于他的文字操作。四六級(jí)，作為英語(yǔ)初級(jí)高考對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單但嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤也是十分看重的，這是是否及格的一個(gè)必備條件，當(dāng)考生發(fā)現(xiàn)難以操控語(yǔ)言變化時(shí)，請(qǐng)一定保持簡(jiǎn)單無(wú)誤的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)，簡(jiǎn)單的構(gòu)思方式，這樣可以力保及格。
在用詞用句上，四六級(jí)作文，不是用難句或難詞拿高分的。文章講求變化，用詞用句的變化。而變化模式不一定要難。如近意表達(dá)的變化，主動(dòng)句被動(dòng)句的轉(zhuǎn)化，副詞的應(yīng)用都是變化的形式。當(dāng)然，從結(jié)構(gòu)上講，邏輯詞的應(yīng)用，如鏈接詞，都是英文思維和結(jié)構(gòu)的體現(xiàn)?？傊?，這次作文沿襲了穩(wěn)健成熟的出題風(fēng)格，各學(xué)員如果有穩(wěn)健的基礎(chǔ)和恰當(dāng)?shù)膽?yīng)試技能，就能取得不錯(cuò)的成績(jī)。
1、現(xiàn)在國(guó)內(nèi)不少人喜歡過(guò)西方的一些節(jié)日
2、產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因
3、這種現(xiàn)象可能帶來(lái)的影響
Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that they prefer enjoying western festivals, such as the coming X’mas. There is a general discussion today about this issue. Certainly, this is a delicious sign of diversity in the life.
A lot of reasons are responsible for it. To begin with, the young men are exposed to the international minds or trends, and they are partly influenced. What’s more, the western views have been spread widely, naturally, and culturally. Moreover, nowadays people have their rights to have a taste of various cultures. In other words, they may celebrate festivals they like besides the conventional days, like the Spring Festival.
Obviously, this does some effects in our life. For example, it will arouse anxiety among so-called protectors of tradition. They unnecessarily worries that the western days are to replace the Chinese convention. Personally speaking, the policy of “l(fā)et it be” will do more good that harm in this field. However, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the negative effects of both traditional and western days.
該樣文盡管有些不夠妥帖的地方，但中心突出（段首是中心），層次分明（邏輯詞的應(yīng)用），語(yǔ)言變化多（近意表達(dá)，副詞，短語(yǔ)，并列，被動(dòng)等等），無(wú)重大語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。
本次作文，如大多推測(cè)，原因現(xiàn)象類(lèi)。寫(xiě)法：“中心句＋1、2、3”模式。即，把提綱變?yōu)橐驗(yàn)?，以中心句體現(xiàn)在每段第一句，后面是分支觀點(diǎn)，第一……；第二……；第三……。所以從構(gòu)思上不用費(fèi)力。另外，英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)是外語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)考試，考查的重點(diǎn)是語(yǔ)言，所以思維是否很合理或獨(dú)特?zé)o關(guān)緊要。當(dāng)考生能簡(jiǎn)化其構(gòu)思時(shí)，將更有利于他的文字操作。四六級(jí)，作為英語(yǔ)初級(jí)高考對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單但嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤也是十分看重的，這是是否及格的一個(gè)必備條件，當(dāng)考生發(fā)現(xiàn)難以操控語(yǔ)言變化時(shí)，請(qǐng)一定保持簡(jiǎn)單無(wú)誤的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)，簡(jiǎn)單的構(gòu)思方式，這樣可以力保及格。
在用詞用句上，四六級(jí)作文，不是用難句或難詞拿高分的。文章講求變化，用詞用句的變化。而變化模式不一定要難。如近意表達(dá)的變化，主動(dòng)句被動(dòng)句的轉(zhuǎn)化，副詞的應(yīng)用都是變化的形式。當(dāng)然，從結(jié)構(gòu)上講，邏輯詞的應(yīng)用，如鏈接詞，都是英文思維和結(jié)構(gòu)的體現(xiàn)?？傊?，這次作文沿襲了穩(wěn)健成熟的出題風(fēng)格，各學(xué)員如果有穩(wěn)健的基礎(chǔ)和恰當(dāng)?shù)膽?yīng)試技能，就能取得不錯(cuò)的成績(jī)。