六級(jí)考前20天短文改錯(cuò)實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練篇-1

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One of thethree major commercial networks, CBS were organized 1. ____in l928 which its founder, William Paley, acquired 2. ____ownership of a group of radio stations. As theColumbia Broadcasting System expanded its operations,soon become the largest radio network in the 3.____ United States, it precociously recognized the potentialfor the rapidly evoved television broadcasting 4. ____technology.
    On July 13th, 1931,〓it began experimentally 5. ____television broadcasting in New York, and ten years later began regular blackandwhite week broadcasts over 6.____its WCBWTV station in the same city, that became 7.____WCBSTV in November 1946. With Television Cityin Hollywood, CBS launched the industry’s first fullscale production studio.Today CBS owns television stations, radio stations,and homevideo production and distribution interests.The CBS \ Broadcasting Group composed of six 8.____divisions:television network, entertainment, sports,news, local television stations, and radio.
    For most of commercial television history, CBShas been the leader in primetime ratings, having thehighestrated shows in almost every year from themid1950s through the mid1980s. During the late1980s, however, CBS lost its top position from NBC. 9. ____CBS has traditionally been strong in the TVnews area. The network began the first regular TV newsprogram in l948 with Douglas Edwards as anchor,Journalism legends such as Edward R. Murrow andWalter Cronkite gave CBS its reputation as quality 10.____news broadcaster.
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    1.【參考答案】將were改為was。
     【參考譯文】作為美國(guó)三大商業(yè)廣播電視網(wǎng)之一,哥倫比亞廣播公司成立于1928年。
     【試題分析】本題辨析謂語動(dòng)詞單復(fù)數(shù)的誤用。
     【詳細(xì)解答】本句的主語為CBS (哥倫比亞廣播公司),而不是networks。因此,將were organized改為was organized。
    2.【參考答案】將which改為when/in which。
     【參考譯文】那年,它的創(chuàng)始人威廉·佩利獲得了數(shù)家廣播電臺(tái)的所有權(quán)。
     【試題分析】本題辨析定語從句引導(dǎo)詞的誤用。
     【詳細(xì)解答】作“年代”的定語從句,其引導(dǎo)詞可以是that,which,in which或when。這須判斷定語從句缺少什么成分,its founder William Paley, acquired ownership of a group of radio stations中,缺少時(shí)間狀語,故引導(dǎo)詞應(yīng)為when或in which。
    3.【參考答案】將become改為becoming。
    【參考譯文】隨著哥倫比亞廣播公司業(yè)務(wù)范圍的拓展,它很快成了美國(guó)的廣播網(wǎng)。
    【試題分析】本題辨析謂語動(dòng)詞與分詞狀語的誤用。故意將分詞短語設(shè)計(jì)錯(cuò)誤,這是六級(jí)考試辨錯(cuò)題的一個(gè)常考類型。
    【詳細(xì)解答】As the Columbia Broadcasting System expanded its operations,是一個(gè)由as引導(dǎo)伴隨狀語,與soon become the largest radio network in the United States之間有一種邏輯上的因果關(guān)系,而不是并列關(guān)系,而且soon become…在句法上也與并列句子不合。(由and連結(jié)),因此,用become是不合適的,由于become的邏輯主語是the Columbia Broadcasting Sytem,因而將become變?yōu)閎ecoming,使這個(gè)句子成為結(jié)果狀語后,就使整個(gè)句子符合邏輯連貫性了。
    4.【參考答案】將evolved改為evolving。
    【參考譯文】它一開始就認(rèn)識(shí)到了未來廣播電視技術(shù)迅猛發(fā)展的趨勢(shì)。
    【試題分析】本題辨析作前置定語時(shí)分詞的誤用。
    【詳細(xì)解答】作前置定語時(shí),現(xiàn)在分詞表示“正在或?qū)⒁l(fā)生”,過去分詞表示“已經(jīng)成為過去”。根據(jù)句意,發(fā)展趨勢(shì)是未來的,因此,evolved是不合適的。要將evolved改為evolving。
    5.【參考答案】將experimentally改為experimental。
    【參考譯文】1931年7月13日,它開始在紐約試播電視節(jié)目。
    【試題分析】本題辨析形容詞,副詞的誤用。
    【詳細(xì)解答】副詞作狀語時(shí),通常在實(shí)義動(dòng)詞之前,助動(dòng)詞之后。那么,experimentally放在began之后,是不合適的,那么,experimentally應(yīng)修飾television broadcasting。但修飾名詞應(yīng)用形容詞experimental,而不是experimentally。
    6.【參考答案】將week改為weekly。
    【參考譯文】10年后,開始在紐約通過其WCBWTV電視臺(tái)每周播放一定的黑白電視節(jié)目。
     【試題分析】本題辨析定語的誤用。
    【詳細(xì)解答】名詞也可以作定語,但一定要符合句意。week意為“周,星期”,與broadcast的搭配,沒有什么合乎邏輯的含義,若將之換為weekly,“每周播放”則合乎句意。
    7.【參考答案】將that改為which。
    【參考譯文】1946年11月,WCBWTV電視臺(tái)改為WCBSTV。
    【試題分析】本題辨析非限定性定語從句的誤用。
    【詳細(xì)解答】從邏輯意義上講,that became WCBWTV in Novermber 1946是非限定性定語從句,that代替WCBWTV。但非限定性定語從句的引導(dǎo)詞,只能用which。
    8.【參考答案】將composed改為is composed。
    【參考譯文】該悴サ縭蛹龐辛笞槌剎糠鄭旱縭油?、娱缼体育、袛仈Q⒌胤降縭猶ㄒ約骯悴サ縑ā?
    【試題分析】本題辨析動(dòng)詞語態(tài)的誤用。
    【詳細(xì)解答】“在表示由……組成”時(shí),一般用be composed of。
    9.【參考答案】將from改為to。
    【參考譯文】然而,到了80年代末,哥倫比亞廣播公司失去了其地位,由全國(guó)廣播公司取而代之。
    【試題分析】本題辨析介詞的誤用。
    【詳細(xì)解答】from,表示“從……來”。本句因from的誤用,使句子失去了邏輯意義,則將from改為to,就表示了“將位置丟給了NBC”,to表示的意義剛好和from相反。
    10.【參考答案】將quality前加一個(gè)“a”。
     【參考譯文】新聞界的傳奇人們愛德華·默羅和沃爾特·克朗凱特給哥倫比亞廣播公司帶來了盛譽(yù),使其被稱為信得過的新聞廣播電視臺(tái)。
     【試題分析】本題辨析不定冠詞的漏用。
     【詳細(xì)解答】quality news broadcaster的中心詞是broadcaster(廣播電視臺(tái)),是可數(shù)名詞的單數(shù)形式,所以,應(yīng)在quality前加上不定冠詞a。