新六級-綜合改錯題六(1)

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錯誤類型
    1.邏輯表達(dá)錯誤 2.介詞使用錯誤 3.代詞使用錯誤 4.非謂語動詞使用錯誤 5.主謂語前后不一致錯誤 6.名詞的錯誤 7.代詞使用錯誤 8.冠詞的錯誤 9.句子結(jié)構(gòu)的錯誤 10.時態(tài)語態(tài)和語氣的使用錯誤 11.易混淆詞的使用錯誤。
    四、非謂語動詞使用錯誤
    非謂語動詞在六級綜合改錯里算是一個較為令人頭疼的改錯類型,它包括不定式、分詞、動名詞。六級改錯中主要出現(xiàn)的是非謂語動詞和主要謂語動詞之間的混淆,具體分為以下兩種情況:
    ① 分詞,主要是現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞的誤用,如: a puzzled question → a puzzling question ; an exciting girl → an excited girl 等。
    ② 動詞非謂語形式做主語、賓語,有時需要 it 作形式主語或形式賓語。如: This is no good arguing with him.(This → it )
    例1
    The idea that learn a foreign language is hard 1.__________
    work is realized by every student. 分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知:the idea是主語;is realized是謂語部分;that引導(dǎo)同位語從句。從句中l(wèi)earn a foreign language是主語,而learn是動詞形式,應(yīng)改為動名詞“l(fā)earning”。
    例2
    From these unearthed bones scientists are able
    to reconstruct the skeleton of the animal and from
    the reconstructing skeleton, they can obtain quite 1.__________
    a good idea of its appearance. “reconstructing”表示正在進(jìn)行的動作,而根據(jù)原句可知,“skeleton”本身并不能發(fā)出這個動作,而應(yīng)該為“reconstructed”,意為“the skeleton that is reconstructed”,這是過去分詞作為定語。
    例3
    Lighthouses are set up to warn the passed ships 1.__________
    of the dangers along the coast. Ancient people used
    simple fire signal which could only mean “Danger!
    Keep off“. ”passed ships“表示”已經(jīng)過去的船只“,當(dāng)然不可能再給予警告,這不符合邏輯,應(yīng)該改為passing,意為”過往的船只“,此處現(xiàn)在分詞作定語。
    例4
    But modern lighthouse also identifies itself in a
    code knowing to all ships that pass by. Most of the 1.__________
    modern lighthouses have a revolving light that is
    red and then green.
    根據(jù)句意可知,這些代碼所有的船只都知道,即“a code which is known to all ships”的省略形式,“knowing”表示“正在知道,了解”這個動作過程,顯然不符合題意,故應(yīng)該將knowing改為known.
    非謂語動詞的使用錯誤雖然不外乎不定式、分詞(包括現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞)以及動名詞三種類型,然而使用起來往往容易混淆,而且也不易區(qū)分,所以得分率通常都較低。
    練習(xí)題:
    1 Judging by today's standards the techniques applied 1.__________
    to the construction of these ancient palaces are highly
    advanced.
    2 TV has become an essential part of our daily life,
    keeping us informed of the news of the day. Comparing 2.__________
    with other media of information and education, TV is
    almost unrivalled.
    3 The characters being described in this TV play are 3.__________
    very true to life, which may be the reason why it
    touched a nation of audience.
    4 There are a great many places of interest in this
    city. But the major attraction is a recently built
    hotel which resembles a sailing ship when seeing 4.__________
    from a distance. No travelers leave the city without
    visiting it.
    5 The building built now at our school is the new 5.__________
    library.
    6 A lighthouse must be high enough for its light
    to see far away, but if it is too high, it has more 6.__________
    possibility to be destroyed by high wind; so it is
    not always true to say that the higher it is the better.
    7 Consider the great need for improving many 7.__________
    aspects of the global environment, one is surely
    justified in his concern for the money and resources
    that are poured into the space exploration efforts.
    8 The small college, however, generally provides
    a limited number of courses and specializations,
    but offers a better student-faculty radio, thus permit 8.__________
    individualized attention to students.
    9 The way space is used to enable the individual
    to achieve privacy, to build homes or designing 9.__________
    cities is culturally influenced.
    10 But the fourth robber put him quite beside himself
    by approaching him and asked what the dog 10.__________
    cost him.