一）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Immoral Behavior in Public. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.我們經(jīng)常在公共場(chǎng)合見到各種不道德的行為，敘述你的一次相關(guān)經(jīng)歷。
2.這些不文明行為會(huì)有哪些影響。
3.我們應(yīng)該怎樣改善這種現(xiàn)象。
●審題概述●
這是一篇議論文，可以根據(jù)作文要求列出提綱：第一部分，列舉不文明行為并敘述一次相關(guān)經(jīng)歷；第二部分，不文明行為的影響，一兩個(gè)即可；第三部分，提出建議。
【范文】
Immoral Behavior in Public
To witness ○1immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line.
○1Immoral behaviors in public ○2initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our ○3sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.
The reform of○1 this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical ○2implementation and ○3cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.
We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone ○1shares the huge responsibility of ○2demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society.
◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：
作文要求第一點(diǎn)，相關(guān)經(jīng)歷
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
○1 immoral behavior in public：直接點(diǎn)題
◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：
不文明行為的影響
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
○1 immoral behavior in public：重復(fù)名詞詞組，與第一段銜接
○2 initiate：意思是“產(chǎn)生，發(fā)動(dòng)”
○3sense of social responsibility：意思是“社會(huì)責(zé)任感”
◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：
如何改善這些現(xiàn)象
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
○1 this phenomenon：指代前文“immoral behavior in public”，與上文銜接，且避免重復(fù)
○2implementation：意為“執(zhí)行，實(shí)施”
○3cost effectiveness：意為“成本效率”
④ common good：意為“公益”
◇第四段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：
總結(jié)
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
○1share a huge responsibility: 意為“承擔(dān)重大責(zé)任”
○2demonstrate：意為“展現(xiàn)”
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Immoral Behavior in Public. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.我們經(jīng)常在公共場(chǎng)合見到各種不道德的行為，敘述你的一次相關(guān)經(jīng)歷。
2.這些不文明行為會(huì)有哪些影響。
3.我們應(yīng)該怎樣改善這種現(xiàn)象。
●審題概述●
這是一篇議論文，可以根據(jù)作文要求列出提綱：第一部分，列舉不文明行為并敘述一次相關(guān)經(jīng)歷；第二部分，不文明行為的影響，一兩個(gè)即可；第三部分，提出建議。
【范文】
Immoral Behavior in Public
To witness ○1immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line.
○1Immoral behaviors in public ○2initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our ○3sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.
The reform of○1 this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical ○2implementation and ○3cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.
We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone ○1shares the huge responsibility of ○2demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society.
◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：
作文要求第一點(diǎn)，相關(guān)經(jīng)歷
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
○1 immoral behavior in public：直接點(diǎn)題
◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：
不文明行為的影響
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
○1 immoral behavior in public：重復(fù)名詞詞組，與第一段銜接
○2 initiate：意思是“產(chǎn)生，發(fā)動(dòng)”
○3sense of social responsibility：意思是“社會(huì)責(zé)任感”
◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：
如何改善這些現(xiàn)象
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
○1 this phenomenon：指代前文“immoral behavior in public”，與上文銜接，且避免重復(fù)
○2implementation：意為“執(zhí)行，實(shí)施”
○3cost effectiveness：意為“成本效率”
④ common good：意為“公益”
◇第四段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：
總結(jié)
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
○1share a huge responsibility: 意為“承擔(dān)重大責(zé)任”
○2demonstrate：意為“展現(xiàn)”