上海新東方四級寫作精解:題型示例及高分范文

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上海新東方四六級作文主講教師 楊渝
    作為四六級改革浪潮沖擊最小的一個部分,2006年6月17日的四級作文考題出題思路依然體現(xiàn)了穩(wěn)定的態(tài)勢。這一篇A Poster Recruiting依然沿用了原因現(xiàn)象類文章的出題方法,而相比以前的題目,在寫作形式上給同學們提供了較大的發(fā)揮空間,作為書信格式或是普通短文形式出現(xiàn)皆可。下面從題型分析,范文示例及寫作對策三個方面對今年的考題作一個
    簡要的分析。
    一.題型分析
    從2000年以來,四六級作文逐漸讓正反闡釋文(一些人認為,另一些人認為,我認為)這樣的文體淡出歷史舞臺。取而代之的是一種以說明具體的原因現(xiàn)象的的文章(現(xiàn)象引入、原因、危害、方法等用層次過渡加以提示(如:1 2 3)。這種文章是最近幾年四級和六級的主打題型,本次作文的題目也在考前預(yù)料之內(nèi),用原因現(xiàn)象類的寫作方式可以輕松應(yīng)對的。
    本文提綱如下:
    1、校學生會將組織一次暑假志愿者活動,現(xiàn)招募志愿者
    2、本次志愿者活動的目的,內(nèi)容,安排等
    3、報名聯(lián)系方式
    提綱 比較清晰,不存在理解障礙,是比較典型的三段式寫作方式,按照我們教學中講的拆分提綱辦法可以在考試中簡單地把提綱稍作改動如下:
    1. 學生會有招募志愿者的活動,值得關(guān)注
    2. 本次志愿者活動的安排如下:1 目的 2 內(nèi)容 3 安排
    3. 報名方式及聯(lián)系方式分別給出
    各段的提綱句用自己能夠支撐的語言寫成主題句放在段首,然后在找出最簡單的內(nèi)容去支撐小的觀點。每個觀點一句話即可。
    二.高分范文示例:
    A Poster Recruiting
    Now people in growing numbers realize that it is important for college students to take an active part in social activities. Therefore, the student union of our university decides to organize a social practice during the summer holiday and is now recruiting volunteers from all the students.
    The details of the activity are listed as follows. First of all, the activity is designated to broaden the students’ view so as to enrich their knowledge. Next, the arrangement mainly includes looking after the senior citizens who live alone, introducing the effective ways of environmental protection to the passers-by in the street and cooperating in a survey for some companies. Last but not least, the timetable, namely schedule, will be settled down by next Monday.
    It is high time that we placed great emphasis on the information beyond books. As long as you are an undergraduate student of this university and are willing to take the responsibility to help others, welcome to contact us at 12345678 or send email to joy@hotmail.com. Please act without delay!