「要求」
題目：人們對(duì)旅游觀光有各種不同的看法，旅游也有其巨大的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，同時(shí)也有缺點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一短文談?wù)勀闳绾慰创糜蔚摹?BR> 「范文」
Nowadays， it is very popular among young people to travel around and see the world. Some people say they want something exciting and choose sightseeing. Some people who go outside simply want to see how other people live. And other people hope to refresh themselves and relax.
However， when you want to travel， you will find many things to worry about before you really enjoy yourself. For example， ticket， hotel， luggage， thirst， hunger， rain， etc.
In my opinion， if you have made up your mind to travel， you'd better well prepare yourself and never complain.
Living close to nature is fun， especially for city people. Many new inventions make camping easier.
「評(píng)語(yǔ)」
本文從幾個(gè)方面表明了不同人有不同旅游觀念這一現(xiàn)實(shí)，同時(shí)指出旅游的麻煩之處，而沒(méi)有泛泛地談旅游的種種優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)，這是本文取勝之處。文末的話，形象表明了大眾對(duì)旅游的態(tài)度，顯得真實(shí)貼切。此文另一優(yōu)點(diǎn)，在于羅列不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)有條不紊。
題目：人們對(duì)旅游觀光有各種不同的看法，旅游也有其巨大的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，同時(shí)也有缺點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一短文談?wù)勀闳绾慰创糜蔚摹?BR> 「范文」
Nowadays， it is very popular among young people to travel around and see the world. Some people say they want something exciting and choose sightseeing. Some people who go outside simply want to see how other people live. And other people hope to refresh themselves and relax.
However， when you want to travel， you will find many things to worry about before you really enjoy yourself. For example， ticket， hotel， luggage， thirst， hunger， rain， etc.
In my opinion， if you have made up your mind to travel， you'd better well prepare yourself and never complain.
Living close to nature is fun， especially for city people. Many new inventions make camping easier.
「評(píng)語(yǔ)」
本文從幾個(gè)方面表明了不同人有不同旅游觀念這一現(xiàn)實(shí)，同時(shí)指出旅游的麻煩之處，而沒(méi)有泛泛地談旅游的種種優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)，這是本文取勝之處。文末的話，形象表明了大眾對(duì)旅游的態(tài)度，顯得真實(shí)貼切。此文另一優(yōu)點(diǎn)，在于羅列不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)有條不紊。