范文:Escape for a While

字號(hào):

「要求」
    要求:人的生活難免會(huì)遇到挫折和痛苦。當(dāng)生活對(duì)你收斂起笑容時(shí),你該以什么樣的態(tài)度回報(bào)生活呢?請(qǐng)以Escape for a While為題,寫一篇80字左右的文章,包括以下要點(diǎn):
    當(dāng)你在生活中遇到困難時(shí),暫時(shí)的回避往往會(huì)有所裨益。
    如果你不能身體力行地從煩惱中暫時(shí)解脫出來(lái),精神上的“想像回避法”也不失為一種很好的方法。
    暫時(shí)地回避困難并不等于逃避現(xiàn)實(shí),其目的是為了最終解決困難。
    「范文」
    Escape for a While
    When things go wrong, it is often helpful to get away from the problem for a while. At school, you can go out for a walk or go to watch a movie. If you can't physically get away from your problem, try an imaginary escape. Even a few minutes in your imaginary retreat can refresh you . In that way, you can come back and deal with your problem when you are in better mood.
    迂回是一種策略。寫作也是一樣,正面無(wú)法表達(dá)的,試試側(cè)面描述,或者反面對(duì)照?
    「評(píng)語(yǔ)」
    本文層次清楚,舉例恰當(dāng),句型運(yùn)用靈活自如,“go wrong”、“get away from”、“deal with”等短語(yǔ)恰如其分,起到了畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。