范文:Finding your Talent

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「要求」
    ??瘺Q定舉辦關于“學習與課外活動”的征文,要求如下:
    有人認為在大學里應該多參加一些社團活動,這比功課重要。
    有人認為在學校里主要的任務是學習,不愿參加課外活動。
    以上2種看法你贊成哪一種,說明你的原因。
    「范文」
    Finding your Talent
    I prefer the type of student who spends more time on his studies because I recognize that a person cannot be good at everything and that he must specialize.
    An old English saying——Jack of all trades but master of none. I now realize that I was not an unfortunate child in preferring reading to football. I should, in fact, have been given more time in the library.
    I have no sense when I take part in the activities such as clubs and sports. I find my favorite in studying. So I am willing to stay in library.
    I think everyone has his own talent in certain things. So I also support the students who like to play football of other things more than study. Talent is a sense “God  given”,I think everyone should find it and follow it.
    「評語」
    角度新穎。從“每個人都有自己的天分”入手,既表明了自己的立場,又論及了其它。論證合理明析,用詞準確,句式完整。