「要求」
請(qǐng)以“The first…”為題,描寫一場(chǎng)景,可以是自然景觀,也可是其它的某些經(jīng)歷。要求描寫具體生動(dòng),抓住事物特點(diǎn),字?jǐn)?shù):100左右。
「范文」
The First Snow
The first snow came. How beautiful it was, falling so silently all day long, all night long, on the mountains, on the meadows, on the roofs! All white covered the river, which marked its course by a winding black line across the leaden sky revealed more fully the wonderful beauty and intricacy of their branches. What silence, too, came with the snow, and what seclusion! Every sound was muffled. Every noise changed to something soft.
「評(píng)語」
本文通過寫第一場(chǎng)雪時(shí)的景象,抒發(fā)了對(duì)大自然的愛戀。這一主題貫穿文章始終,形象優(yōu)美逼真,讀來使人如身臨其境,若聞其聲,具有很強(qiáng)的感染力。
請(qǐng)以“The first…”為題,描寫一場(chǎng)景,可以是自然景觀,也可是其它的某些經(jīng)歷。要求描寫具體生動(dòng),抓住事物特點(diǎn),字?jǐn)?shù):100左右。
「范文」
The First Snow
The first snow came. How beautiful it was, falling so silently all day long, all night long, on the mountains, on the meadows, on the roofs! All white covered the river, which marked its course by a winding black line across the leaden sky revealed more fully the wonderful beauty and intricacy of their branches. What silence, too, came with the snow, and what seclusion! Every sound was muffled. Every noise changed to something soft.
「評(píng)語」
本文通過寫第一場(chǎng)雪時(shí)的景象,抒發(fā)了對(duì)大自然的愛戀。這一主題貫穿文章始終,形象優(yōu)美逼真,讀來使人如身臨其境,若聞其聲,具有很強(qiáng)的感染力。