「要求」你要選擇一所什么大學(xué)的什么專業(yè),為什么?
「范文」
Choosing My Major
Born in a small village in Shanxi Province, I had never experienced anything exciting before I turned 17. I had spent 6 years in primary school and another six in middle school, where I ranked among the top students. Life was extremely simple during those twelve years. For diversion, I enjoyed reading novels and watching TV programs and films. In my imagination I traveled to all those places described in the books or shown on the screen. Once I put my imaginary travels on paper and won a prize in a country wide composition contest. So encouraged, I declared my intention of studying journalism at Ren Min University in Beijing. Everybody in my family opposed my decision, saying that I was too young to be on my own. Although I felt a bit intimidated by Ren Min University's reputation, I finally applied for this famous university.
「評語」
本文的一個(gè)突出特點(diǎn)是行文流暢,語言簡易通順,毫無板滯之處。原因、事實(shí)等等,都非常清晰,而且句式變化多,詞語運(yùn)用靈活,表現(xiàn)出作者較好的駕馭語言的能力。
「范文」
Choosing My Major
Born in a small village in Shanxi Province, I had never experienced anything exciting before I turned 17. I had spent 6 years in primary school and another six in middle school, where I ranked among the top students. Life was extremely simple during those twelve years. For diversion, I enjoyed reading novels and watching TV programs and films. In my imagination I traveled to all those places described in the books or shown on the screen. Once I put my imaginary travels on paper and won a prize in a country wide composition contest. So encouraged, I declared my intention of studying journalism at Ren Min University in Beijing. Everybody in my family opposed my decision, saying that I was too young to be on my own. Although I felt a bit intimidated by Ren Min University's reputation, I finally applied for this famous university.
「評語」
本文的一個(gè)突出特點(diǎn)是行文流暢,語言簡易通順,毫無板滯之處。原因、事實(shí)等等,都非常清晰,而且句式變化多,詞語運(yùn)用靈活,表現(xiàn)出作者較好的駕馭語言的能力。