我的家鄉(xiāng)

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「要求」
    假設(shè)你的家鄉(xiāng)在農(nóng)村。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示,以“我的家鄉(xiāng)”為題寫一篇短文(字?jǐn)?shù):80—100)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):
    你家鄉(xiāng)的村莊四面環(huán)山,人口600多。
    一條小河從村中流過(guò),河上有兩座橋:一座木橋,一座新石橋。
    村上近年來(lái)發(fā)生了很大變化,村里現(xiàn)在有商店、學(xué)校、醫(yī)院和工廠。
    人民生活水平(living standard)有了較大的提高。
    「范文」
    My home village is called Ying Fang Village. There are 600 or more people in it.
    It is surrounded by green hills. A brook winds its way through from west to east. There are two bridges across the brook, an old wooden one and a new stone one.
    Great changes have taken place in my home village in the past few years. In the center a beautiful office building has been set up. In the east there is a school. In the west there stand two small buildings. One is a shop, the other is a small cinema. Most of the villagers now live in new houses.
    Seen from the top of the hill, my home village looks like a beautiful park. I'm sure it will become even more beautiful in the future.
    「評(píng)語(yǔ)」
    本文用生動(dòng)的語(yǔ)言,精確的詞匯,復(fù)雜多變的句型,將自己的家鄉(xiāng)描寫的非常美麗,給人以美的享受。