「要求」
你應(yīng)邀參加“英語園地”的征文活動，寫一篇以“A Friend to Rememker”為題的英語小短文。要求如下：
簡要地介紹你的一位朋友。
寫清你快他/她的原因。
語言流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確。
朋友有如美酒，瀝久彌醇。
「范文」
A Friend To Remember
One of my best friends is my middle school history teacher. To me， he is not only a beloved teacher but also an intimate friend. Though I last met him years ago， I have not forgotten his amazing qualities.
I was impressed most deeply by his devotion to teaching. He was not after money nor power. Instead， he spent all his energy on teaching. Well-prepared and clearly delivered， his lectures always drew our attention to different historical events both in China and in the world. Furthermore， he could be counted on to explain his ideas in an imaginative way. He made learning more enjoyable and more lasting.
「評語」
這篇小短文情真意切，作者用詞很貼切到位，很好地表達(dá)了作者的懷念之情。語言通俗曉暢，可見作者對英語掌握得很好。
你應(yīng)邀參加“英語園地”的征文活動，寫一篇以“A Friend to Rememker”為題的英語小短文。要求如下：
簡要地介紹你的一位朋友。
寫清你快他/她的原因。
語言流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確。
朋友有如美酒，瀝久彌醇。
「范文」
A Friend To Remember
One of my best friends is my middle school history teacher. To me， he is not only a beloved teacher but also an intimate friend. Though I last met him years ago， I have not forgotten his amazing qualities.
I was impressed most deeply by his devotion to teaching. He was not after money nor power. Instead， he spent all his energy on teaching. Well-prepared and clearly delivered， his lectures always drew our attention to different historical events both in China and in the world. Furthermore， he could be counted on to explain his ideas in an imaginative way. He made learning more enjoyable and more lasting.
「評語」
這篇小短文情真意切，作者用詞很貼切到位，很好地表達(dá)了作者的懷念之情。語言通俗曉暢，可見作者對英語掌握得很好。