「要求」
每個人都有自己的理想，將來在社會上你想從事什么職業(yè)呢？請以“My Profession”為題，談?wù)勛约合霃氖碌穆殬I(yè)，你選擇這個職業(yè)的原因，你將為實(shí)現(xiàn)這個理想做哪些準(zhǔn)備。
「范文」
My Profession
If I may choose my own profession， I would like to be a doctor. It is said that doctors make a lot of money， but this is not what I am after.
Illness and disease always bring pain and suffering to mankind. Only doctors who are trained to know the causes of different kinds of illness and the best ways to cure them can help prevent them. What's more， a doctor is a useful person and respected by people.
I'll work hard to learn as much as possible. In particular， I should do well in physics， chemistry and mathematics. I hope to enter a medical school after I graduate from high school.
「評語」
文章緊扣題意，開頭說明了他的職業(yè)追求，接著敘述了選擇這一職業(yè)的原因及自己所作的準(zhǔn)備，表達(dá)了作者為人類解除痛苦戰(zhàn)勝疾病的良好愿望。語言流暢，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章。
每個人都有自己的理想，將來在社會上你想從事什么職業(yè)呢？請以“My Profession”為題，談?wù)勛约合霃氖碌穆殬I(yè)，你選擇這個職業(yè)的原因，你將為實(shí)現(xiàn)這個理想做哪些準(zhǔn)備。
「范文」
My Profession
If I may choose my own profession， I would like to be a doctor. It is said that doctors make a lot of money， but this is not what I am after.
Illness and disease always bring pain and suffering to mankind. Only doctors who are trained to know the causes of different kinds of illness and the best ways to cure them can help prevent them. What's more， a doctor is a useful person and respected by people.
I'll work hard to learn as much as possible. In particular， I should do well in physics， chemistry and mathematics. I hope to enter a medical school after I graduate from high school.
「評語」
文章緊扣題意，開頭說明了他的職業(yè)追求，接著敘述了選擇這一職業(yè)的原因及自己所作的準(zhǔn)備，表達(dá)了作者為人類解除痛苦戰(zhàn)勝疾病的良好愿望。語言流暢，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章。