六級(jí)作文題：
圖表作文，關(guān)于一個(gè)美國大學(xué)圖書館的圖書流動(dòng)量（pop fiction, general nonfiction, science, art等），給出他們的流動(dòng)比例對比，說明原因，并說明你自己喜歡閱讀什么樣的書。
范文：
It can be discerned that the American students prefer to read the popular novel rather than other kind of books, such as the nonpopular （unpopular） novel, the books of technology, poem and so on. The percentage of the popular novel current（currently） is about 68.2%. Other kind of novels' current（currently） is, reletively （relatively）, about 16.8%, 8.3%, and 5.2%.
It is not hard to think out why the popular novels can attract so many students. The popular novel is interesting, and not so abstract as books that full of the mathmatic formulate（mathematic formulae）。 However, as university students, study is the first task for us to do. So we should pay more attention to the books about our major. Fictions may color our life, but it can not be the key part of our studying life.
Personally, I would like to spend my free time in reading books about my major, such as technology digests, computer newspaper…… Because I want do to（刪掉） a good job in my subjects. Fortunately, my dreams come true, meanwhile, I 've gained other things——I found（have founded） a solid basic knowledge about my major（加破折號(hào)）make me feel easy to contrive the electronic circuit which have to be done during our bachelor years. Thanks to those books！
點(diǎn)評：（1）切題。
（2）論證比較有力，表達(dá)思想清楚。
（3）文字通順，連貫性較好，但有個(gè)別語言錯(cuò)誤。
注： 文中劃線部分為原文的一些明顯語言錯(cuò)誤，括號(hào)里的為修改建議，為保持原文面貌，對于結(jié)構(gòu)沒有做過多改動(dòng)。
圖表作文，關(guān)于一個(gè)美國大學(xué)圖書館的圖書流動(dòng)量（pop fiction, general nonfiction, science, art等），給出他們的流動(dòng)比例對比，說明原因，并說明你自己喜歡閱讀什么樣的書。
范文：
It can be discerned that the American students prefer to read the popular novel rather than other kind of books, such as the nonpopular （unpopular） novel, the books of technology, poem and so on. The percentage of the popular novel current（currently） is about 68.2%. Other kind of novels' current（currently） is, reletively （relatively）, about 16.8%, 8.3%, and 5.2%.
It is not hard to think out why the popular novels can attract so many students. The popular novel is interesting, and not so abstract as books that full of the mathmatic formulate（mathematic formulae）。 However, as university students, study is the first task for us to do. So we should pay more attention to the books about our major. Fictions may color our life, but it can not be the key part of our studying life.
Personally, I would like to spend my free time in reading books about my major, such as technology digests, computer newspaper…… Because I want do to（刪掉） a good job in my subjects. Fortunately, my dreams come true, meanwhile, I 've gained other things——I found（have founded） a solid basic knowledge about my major（加破折號(hào)）make me feel easy to contrive the electronic circuit which have to be done during our bachelor years. Thanks to those books！
點(diǎn)評：（1）切題。
（2）論證比較有力，表達(dá)思想清楚。
（3）文字通順，連貫性較好，但有個(gè)別語言錯(cuò)誤。
注： 文中劃線部分為原文的一些明顯語言錯(cuò)誤，括號(hào)里的為修改建議，為保持原文面貌，對于結(jié)構(gòu)沒有做過多改動(dòng)。