On Praise（論贊揚(yáng)）
1.人們都喜歡贊揚(yáng)；
2.但人們卻很少得到贊揚(yáng)；
3.我們應(yīng)該……
[寫作導(dǎo)航]文章一開始的主題句應(yīng)點(diǎn)明主題，接著應(yīng)用具體例子支持，即無論是誰，比如孩子、學(xué)生、雇員都希望得到贊揚(yáng)。該段的結(jié)尾句可用一個(gè)優(yōu)美的比喻：贊揚(yáng)猶如陽光，有了它，萬物才能茁壯成長(zhǎng)；第二段分析現(xiàn)狀，可通過舉例說明人們?cè)谌粘Ｉ钪胁坏毁潛P(yáng)，反而常批評(píng)的做法；最后一段指出贊揚(yáng)別人并非很難，只要用心去發(fā)現(xiàn)，努力去贊揚(yáng)發(fā)生在生活中的值得贊揚(yáng)的事，一個(gè)精彩的世界就會(huì)呈現(xiàn)在你我的面前。
[范文]
Everyone wants to be appreciated and praised by others for what they do and what they say. For instance, children want to be praised by their parents. Students want to be praised by their teachers. Employees want to be praised by their employers. It seems that praise is like sunlight to us, we can't flower and grow without it.
But it is a pity that while most of us are only too ready to blow the cold wind of harsh criticism on others, we are somehow reluctant to give people around us the warm sunshine of praise. For example, most mothers are always not satisfied with the progress their children made at school Most teachers always drown their students
compositions in critical red ink, instead of commenting favorably on them. Most employersarealways criticalabout what their employees have done instead of giving encouragement to them. produces may be great. So, let's be alert to the small excellence around us and comment on them. We will not only bring joy into other people's lives, but also, very often, add happiness to our own.
1.人們都喜歡贊揚(yáng)；
2.但人們卻很少得到贊揚(yáng)；
3.我們應(yīng)該……
[寫作導(dǎo)航]文章一開始的主題句應(yīng)點(diǎn)明主題，接著應(yīng)用具體例子支持，即無論是誰，比如孩子、學(xué)生、雇員都希望得到贊揚(yáng)。該段的結(jié)尾句可用一個(gè)優(yōu)美的比喻：贊揚(yáng)猶如陽光，有了它，萬物才能茁壯成長(zhǎng)；第二段分析現(xiàn)狀，可通過舉例說明人們?cè)谌粘Ｉ钪胁坏毁潛P(yáng)，反而常批評(píng)的做法；最后一段指出贊揚(yáng)別人并非很難，只要用心去發(fā)現(xiàn)，努力去贊揚(yáng)發(fā)生在生活中的值得贊揚(yáng)的事，一個(gè)精彩的世界就會(huì)呈現(xiàn)在你我的面前。
[范文]
Everyone wants to be appreciated and praised by others for what they do and what they say. For instance, children want to be praised by their parents. Students want to be praised by their teachers. Employees want to be praised by their employers. It seems that praise is like sunlight to us, we can't flower and grow without it.
But it is a pity that while most of us are only too ready to blow the cold wind of harsh criticism on others, we are somehow reluctant to give people around us the warm sunshine of praise. For example, most mothers are always not satisfied with the progress their children made at school Most teachers always drown their students
compositions in critical red ink, instead of commenting favorably on them. Most employersarealways criticalabout what their employees have done instead of giving encouragement to them. produces may be great. So, let's be alert to the small excellence around us and comment on them. We will not only bring joy into other people's lives, but also, very often, add happiness to our own.