II、社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題寫作邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)
Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要評(píng)論的事物或觀點(diǎn)(general);
(2) 具體描述這個(gè)事物或者觀點(diǎn)(或者是我對(duì)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象/ 事物的基本看法specific)。
Paragraph 2: (1) 作者對(duì)該現(xiàn)象貨問題的基本看法，即文章的論點(diǎn)句;
(2) 支持性的細(xì)節(jié)分論點(diǎn)(至少兩點(diǎn));
(3) 本段總結(jié)(可以省略)。
Paragraph 3: (1) 總結(jié)全文，定下結(jié)論(通常為我的對(duì)策或看法)。
四級(jí)作文試題2000年1月
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 上大學(xué)的費(fèi)用(tuition and fees)可以通過多多種途徑解決。
2. 哪種途徑適合我(說明理由)。
How I Finance My College Education
How I Finance My College Education
第一段：首先，應(yīng)該是用一種描述性的語言引出討論的重點(diǎn)：
Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.
第二段：有多種的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.銀行貸款 3.打工掙錢
第二段主題句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various.
第二段分寫：
In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.
In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates.
What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.
第三段：我所贊同的方法(闡述原因，為何不選其他的方法)。
Personally/ As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.
For one thing, my parents are not rich enough to afford me.
For another, I will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time/ temporary/ odd jobs.
In addition, I believe I can hunt a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to pay off/ pay back/ return/ give back.
Therefore /So /Hence,.....
使文章富有表現(xiàn)力的手段：
1、使用有難度的詞匯;
2、使用形容詞修飾名詞，用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞或整個(gè)句子;
3、使用被動(dòng)語態(tài);
4、使用倒裝句;(not only... but also...;only...)
5、盡可能地使用名詞，而不是習(xí)慣中的動(dòng)詞和形容詞。
綠化我們的城市
第一段：
近年來，隨著工商業(yè)的迅猛發(fā)展，許多大城市中樹木的數(shù)量大幅度降低。人們作出各種努力防止樹木被砍伐，但是，認(rèn)識(shí)到綠化城市也同樣重要。
Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要評(píng)論的事物或觀點(diǎn)(general);
(2) 具體描述這個(gè)事物或者觀點(diǎn)(或者是我對(duì)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象/ 事物的基本看法specific)。
Paragraph 2: (1) 作者對(duì)該現(xiàn)象貨問題的基本看法，即文章的論點(diǎn)句;
(2) 支持性的細(xì)節(jié)分論點(diǎn)(至少兩點(diǎn));
(3) 本段總結(jié)(可以省略)。
Paragraph 3: (1) 總結(jié)全文，定下結(jié)論(通常為我的對(duì)策或看法)。
四級(jí)作文試題2000年1月
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 上大學(xué)的費(fèi)用(tuition and fees)可以通過多多種途徑解決。
2. 哪種途徑適合我(說明理由)。
How I Finance My College Education
How I Finance My College Education
第一段：首先，應(yīng)該是用一種描述性的語言引出討論的重點(diǎn)：
Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.
第二段：有多種的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.銀行貸款 3.打工掙錢
第二段主題句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various.
第二段分寫：
In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.
In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates.
What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.
第三段：我所贊同的方法(闡述原因，為何不選其他的方法)。
Personally/ As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.
For one thing, my parents are not rich enough to afford me.
For another, I will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time/ temporary/ odd jobs.
In addition, I believe I can hunt a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to pay off/ pay back/ return/ give back.
Therefore /So /Hence,.....
使文章富有表現(xiàn)力的手段：
1、使用有難度的詞匯;
2、使用形容詞修飾名詞，用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞或整個(gè)句子;
3、使用被動(dòng)語態(tài);
4、使用倒裝句;(not only... but also...;only...)
5、盡可能地使用名詞，而不是習(xí)慣中的動(dòng)詞和形容詞。
綠化我們的城市
第一段：
近年來，隨著工商業(yè)的迅猛發(fā)展，許多大城市中樹木的數(shù)量大幅度降低。人們作出各種努力防止樹木被砍伐，但是，認(rèn)識(shí)到綠化城市也同樣重要。