2007年12月英語六級(jí)短文改錯(cuò)(三十六)

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本期練習(xí)重點(diǎn):句子結(jié)構(gòu)(一)[句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整、句子結(jié)構(gòu)混亂]
    1. Peter, who had been driving all day, suggested stop at the next town.___1___
    2. The hours the children spend in their one-way relationship with
    television people undoubtedly affecting their relationships with ___2___
    real-life people
    3. Whatever difficulties we may come across,
    we will help one another to overcome. ___3___
    4. Review their works will give us a much better feel for the wide ___4___
    differences between the two schools of thought.
    5. Deprive of the financial means to remain independent, Tomas ___5___
    Edison was compelled to seek employment as a night telegraph
    operator.
    6. We grow all our own fruit and vegetables, it saves mony, of course.___6___
    7. At three thousand feet, wide plains begin to appear, and there is
    never a moment some distant mountain is not in sight.___7___
    8. Some psychologists believe that those are encouraged to be ___8___
    independent and competent in chldhood are more likely than
    others to succeed.
    9. With prices fluctuating so much, it difficult for the school to plan ___9___
    a budget.
    10. Studies show that the things contribute most to a sense of happiness ___10___
    cannot be bought, such as a good family, friendship and work satisfaction.
    答案及解析:
    1. stop -> stopping
    該句中有動(dòng)詞suggest,該詞后接動(dòng)詞時(shí),要用表達(dá)結(jié)構(gòu)suggest doing sth,動(dòng)名詞作賓語。
    2. affecting -> affect
    分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,the children spend是作the hours的定語從句,整句話缺少謂語。根據(jù)句子的意思和主干,可知要把a(bǔ)ffecting改為affect作謂語。這句話的意思是:孩子們把時(shí)間花在與電視人物的單向交流上,這樣無疑會(huì)影響到他們與真實(shí)生活中的人們交際。
    3. overcome后加them
    overcome意為“克服,戰(zhàn)勝”,是及物動(dòng)詞,要加上賓語。
    4. Review -> Reviewing
    Reviewing用在句中與their work構(gòu)成動(dòng)名詞短語作主語。
    5. Deprive -> Deprived
    該句的后半句是一個(gè)完整的句子,那么逗號(hào)前的句子應(yīng)該是一個(gè)分詞結(jié)構(gòu)做狀語,deprive of與其邏輯主語Tomas Edison之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系,因此要將Deprive改為Deprived。Deprive的用法是deprive sb of sth,意為“剝奪某人的…,使某人喪失….,免去某人…(職務(wù))”。
    6. it -> which
    此處的it代表前面的整個(gè)句子。(非限定性定語從句)
    7. moment后加when
    意思是:海拔3000英尺的地方,寬闊的平原慢慢展示在人們面前,遠(yuǎn)處的群山無時(shí)無刻不映入你的眼簾。此處的moment與后面的句子應(yīng)該是定語從句的關(guān)系,moment在從句中作時(shí)間狀語,故應(yīng)該在之間加引導(dǎo)詞when。
    8. those后加who或去掉are
    Believe后是一個(gè)賓語從句,在該從句中出現(xiàn)了兩個(gè)謂語are encouraged和are more likely,并且之間沒有任何連詞,在英語中不符合規(guī)范。根據(jù)句子的主干意思,are encouraged應(yīng)該是修飾those的定語從句,故應(yīng)該在those后加who。或者去掉are,直接用過去分詞encouraged作those的定語。
    9. it后加is
    10. contribute前加that或which或contribute-> contributing
    本題意思是:研究表明,最有助于產(chǎn)生幸福的東西是不能用錢買到的,例如,良好的家庭生活、友誼及在工作中獲得的滿足等。本題的錯(cuò)誤與第8題一樣,在一個(gè)句子出現(xiàn)了兩個(gè)謂語,所以有一個(gè)必定是作修飾成分的。此處contribute most to a sense of happiness是作定語成分修飾the things,又因?yàn)閠hings在從句中作主語,所以要加上引導(dǎo)詞that或which。