It is really hard to say which is better than the other， city life or rural life， because each has its merits and shortcomings.
Living in a city， people have certain advantages. First， people enjoy various entertainments， both foreign and domestic. Second， there are more cultural activities in a city. Third， city dwellers（居民） gain access to better information service and educational facilities. However， problems exist. The overcrowded population， traffic jam， housing problem， industrial pollution and other issues may result in depression， nervousness and diseases. laving in the country， people can enjoy living in pure nature. They lead a simple and trouble free life. But rural life may not be that perfect. People usually lack cultural activities. They are relatively ill informed （消息閉塞）。 Things go fairly slowly there. And people miss some golden opportunities of making a fortune. The chances of their children being admitted to colleges are slim（不多）。
Obviously， whatever life they lead， people can never feel perfectly satisfied， for conveniences and inconveniences always coexist （共存）。 People wish that they could enjoy the pleasures of both lives. With the rapid economic development， nowadays city dwellers can relax themselves in the country during vacation； and country people have chance to experience city lifestyle when they come to cities.
范文分析 本文思路流暢自然，不是中斷或跳躍式的，而是像流水般平滑。作者使用了表示并列、對(duì)比（but、however）的關(guān)聯(lián)詞及其它詞匯手段（重復(fù)主要詞等）、語(yǔ)法手段（照應(yīng)、替代等）。文內(nèi)段與段之間形成對(duì)立統(tǒng)一，句子意義連貫。論述詳略得當(dāng)，全文語(yǔ)氣協(xié)調(diào)。本文在對(duì)提供的例子進(jìn)行選擇的同時(shí)，還對(duì)其先后順序進(jìn)行了精心安排：以重要性遞增的順序安排例子，使有說(shuō)服力的例子出現(xiàn)在段落做結(jié)論的最重要位置，形成了一種遞進(jìn)的高潮。
Living in a city， people have certain advantages. First， people enjoy various entertainments， both foreign and domestic. Second， there are more cultural activities in a city. Third， city dwellers（居民） gain access to better information service and educational facilities. However， problems exist. The overcrowded population， traffic jam， housing problem， industrial pollution and other issues may result in depression， nervousness and diseases. laving in the country， people can enjoy living in pure nature. They lead a simple and trouble free life. But rural life may not be that perfect. People usually lack cultural activities. They are relatively ill informed （消息閉塞）。 Things go fairly slowly there. And people miss some golden opportunities of making a fortune. The chances of their children being admitted to colleges are slim（不多）。
Obviously， whatever life they lead， people can never feel perfectly satisfied， for conveniences and inconveniences always coexist （共存）。 People wish that they could enjoy the pleasures of both lives. With the rapid economic development， nowadays city dwellers can relax themselves in the country during vacation； and country people have chance to experience city lifestyle when they come to cities.
范文分析 本文思路流暢自然，不是中斷或跳躍式的，而是像流水般平滑。作者使用了表示并列、對(duì)比（but、however）的關(guān)聯(lián)詞及其它詞匯手段（重復(fù)主要詞等）、語(yǔ)法手段（照應(yīng)、替代等）。文內(nèi)段與段之間形成對(duì)立統(tǒng)一，句子意義連貫。論述詳略得當(dāng)，全文語(yǔ)氣協(xié)調(diào)。本文在對(duì)提供的例子進(jìn)行選擇的同時(shí)，還對(duì)其先后順序進(jìn)行了精心安排：以重要性遞增的順序安排例子，使有說(shuō)服力的例子出現(xiàn)在段落做結(jié)論的最重要位置，形成了一種遞進(jìn)的高潮。