新東方:好作文是想出來的 不是背出來的

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這是五年的小作文題目和參考范文,我把里面好的不好的內容都簡單做了分析,請同學們看的時候多結合自己的情況和水平來思考造句,不要盲目背誦,還是要說那句話——作文是想出來的,不是背出來的!
    祝大家夢想成真,前方的路你并不孤獨,因為有我,有你,還有他; 雖然前方的路很黑很長,但漫長的黑夜同樣給了我們安靜的思考和冒險的精神,大家努力!
    2009年考研小作文
    51.Restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been so successful in some regions. “White pollution ”is still going on. Write a letter to the editor(s) of your local newspaper to
    1)give your opinions briefly and
    2) make two or three suggestions
    You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead. You do not need to write the address
    參考范文
    Dear Sir,
    Nowadays,there exists an increasingly serious environmental problem. White pollution has become a common concern of the public. According to a survey,in some areas the ban on the use of plastic bags are not very successful,so white pollution continues.(開頭寫的太羅嗦,其實就簡單的說白色污染再繼續(xù),所以寫信要給建議)
    In my humble opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions. The first action is that,your newspaper would strengthen to report the problem about the bad of plastic bags. The second action is that ,your newspaper should persuade people not to use plastic bags. The last action is that your newspaper should allow the Government to formulate some policies to ban on the use of plastic bags. (這個中間段落結構上雖然清晰,但是結構句式卻乏善可陳,沒有任何句式的變化,的優(yōu)點就是在詞匯上)
    I hope you will find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
    Yours sincerely
    Li Ming
    2008年考研小作文試題
    51. Directions:
    You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob,your landlord there. Write him a letter to
    1)make an apology,and
    2)suggest a solution.
    You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
    Do not write the address. (10 points)
    參考范文
    Dear Bob,
    I am writing to express my apology to you.
    Several days ago,I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house. Unfortunately,after I came back from Canada,I found it in my luggage. I was in such a hurry that I forgot to return it to you. I will send it to you by post or express as soon as possible. If necessary,I will compensate for any troubles it may cause.(這個部分寫的實在是沒什么亮點,就是比較準確,沒有錯誤,但可以寫成, Firstly,the reason why i took away your beloved cd player and found it in my luggage is that i forgot to return it to you when i was leaving. And moreover,i am sure the terrible effect,namely the great inconvenience might be that you fail to listen to your favourite songs when you wnat. Lastly,I am confident that i will never make the same mistakes by avoiding my carelessness and irresponsiblity and try to return this cd play to you as soon as possibe by means of EMS.
    Once again,I feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused. Please accept my apology.
    Sincerely yours,
    Liming
    2007年考研真題 小作文
    51.Directions
    Write a letter to you university library,making suggestions for improving its service.
    You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
    Do not write the address. (10 points)
    Dear Sir or Madam,
    I’m a student in the university and a loyal reader of this library. I’m writing to tell some of my ideas,which I hope to be helpful for you. (第一段寫的還不錯,而且加入了身份的介紹,同時寫出了題目要求---建議,且?guī)в卸ㄕZ從句)
    I notice that many magazines in our library are out of date(過期). It would be beneficial to us students if they could be updated in time. And I suggest introducing some new journals so as to bring new fresh air to the library. Furthermore(邏輯連貫),since we have a huge number of books,it is not easy to find the right one easily. However,if we can introduce some new searching means(引進新的搜索方式,比較好的思路, 如果按湘湘講的寫可以說書太多找起來不方便,帶來的壞影響就是太浪費時間),such as implementing new information management system that would be useful. (他沒有寫服務,其實就寫了兩點建議)
    Thank you for taking time reading this letter and I’m looking forward to seeing some new changes soon. (模板語言)
    Sincerely Yours,
    Li Ming
    2006年考研小作文
    51.Directions
    You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned,asking them to help find a candidate
    You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.
    Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
    Do not write the address. (10 points)
    Dear Sir or Madam,
    As a college student who is studying and living in a good environment,I wish to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial assistance to a child in a remote area. Having conceived such a plan for a long time,I write this letter to request your help to recommend a proper candidate. (開頭太長,不過語言很好,而且有身份介紹,同時說出了很清晰的目的,但是不建議基礎不好的同學模仿)
    I wonder if it is convenient for you if three things concerning the child are taken into consideration. First,the child should come from Gansu Province,for I intend to help a child from my hometown. Second,it will be better if the child is a primary school student. I hope I will help him/her from the very beginning. In addition,he/she must be willing to return to his hometown to help built it after graduation from university.(注意看其中的內容,詞匯沒有任何特殊之處,基本全部是初高中詞匯,就是搭配的比較好,且沒有任何的錯誤)
    My plan will be carried out as follows. On one hand,I will remit at least 2,000 Yuan in cash every year until he/she finishes his/her education before entering college. On the other hand,I decide to teach the child一 math and English in person during my summer vacation,which will surely be more beneficial to the child. (這個段落作者依然是在使用自己最會用的句式結構,但大家無論如何要盡量使用定語從句!!!!而詞匯他只用了幾個他會的難詞,所以大家記得,句式簡單詞匯難,詞匯簡單句式難是你可以二選一的方式,如果做不到,那就保證少出錯,哪怕簡單.)
    Your prompt help would be highly appreciated. And I am looking forward to your reply very soon.(模板!!)
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    2005年考研小作文題目
    51.Directions:
    Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions,But n5ow you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss,Mr. Wang,telling him your decision,stating your reason (s),and making an apology.
    Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
    You do not need to write the address. (10 points)
    Dear Mr. Wang,
    First of all,please allow me to express my deep sorry to you for my resignation(目的詞). I do know that this will bring about much trouble to you so that I write to you for my explanation.
    I decided to quit for some reasons as follows.(理由) To begin with,the job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions is not suitable to me. What’s more,I am preparing for another degree and I prefer to further my study. Again,I apologize for my resignation to you! (這個范文的中間段寫的之爛不評價了,沒什么內容,當然它具備一個它具備的優(yōu)點,那就是沒出錯.....)
    I am looking forward to your early reply. (模板太爛!!!!更好的句式比如說 i will be right here to wait for your early approval and once agian feel deeply sorry for the inconvenience my resignation has cause to you.
    Sincerely yours,
    Li Ming