「要求」
上表更出了世界上主要產(chǎn)銅國在1960年的產(chǎn)銅情況。請根據(jù)上表寫一篇短文。該文應包含如下要點:
1960年十大主要產(chǎn)銅國的銅產(chǎn)量幾乎點到了世界總產(chǎn)量的90%。
產(chǎn)銅國是美國,世界上四分之一的銅產(chǎn)自該國。美國是一個產(chǎn)量超過1,000,000噸的國家。另有三個國家產(chǎn)量分別達到或超過5000,000噸,由多至少依次為贊比亞、智利和蘇聯(lián)。其后是加拿大和剛果兩國,產(chǎn)量分別是350,000和300,000.最后是以秘魯和澳大利亞為首的產(chǎn)量較小的國家。
猜猜ABC指哪種人?American Born Chinese在美國出生的華人。
值得注意的是,銅儲量在全球分布相對均勻。在除去北極和南極以外的各大洲都有大量銅礦。
Silicon 是地球上儲量第二的化學之素?
「范文」
In 1960,the ten leading copper-producing countries produced nearly 95% of the total copper output. The largest producer was the USA, with one-fourth of world production coming from this source. In fact, the USA was the only country to produce more than 1,000,000 tons. Tree other countries each produced half a million tons or more; in decreasing order they were Zambia, Chile and USSR. This group was followed by two countries, Canada and Congo, producing 350,000 and 300,000 tons respectively. Finally, there was a group of smaller producers, led by Peru and Australia. It is worth noting that copper deposits are distributed relatively evenly in the world. They occur in large quantities in all continents except Arctic and Antarctic.
「評語」
該篇文章根據(jù)鋼產(chǎn)量的多少,將主要產(chǎn)鋼國分為四組分別進行了說明,層次分明。句式靈活,“one-fourth of world production coming from …”和“producing 350,00 and 300,000 tons …”等獨立主格、分詞狀語的恰當運用,使行文緊湊,文字精練,內(nèi)容主次分明,體現(xiàn)了上表的主要數(shù)據(jù)特征。
上表更出了世界上主要產(chǎn)銅國在1960年的產(chǎn)銅情況。請根據(jù)上表寫一篇短文。該文應包含如下要點:
1960年十大主要產(chǎn)銅國的銅產(chǎn)量幾乎點到了世界總產(chǎn)量的90%。
產(chǎn)銅國是美國,世界上四分之一的銅產(chǎn)自該國。美國是一個產(chǎn)量超過1,000,000噸的國家。另有三個國家產(chǎn)量分別達到或超過5000,000噸,由多至少依次為贊比亞、智利和蘇聯(lián)。其后是加拿大和剛果兩國,產(chǎn)量分別是350,000和300,000.最后是以秘魯和澳大利亞為首的產(chǎn)量較小的國家。
猜猜ABC指哪種人?American Born Chinese在美國出生的華人。
值得注意的是,銅儲量在全球分布相對均勻。在除去北極和南極以外的各大洲都有大量銅礦。
Silicon 是地球上儲量第二的化學之素?
「范文」
In 1960,the ten leading copper-producing countries produced nearly 95% of the total copper output. The largest producer was the USA, with one-fourth of world production coming from this source. In fact, the USA was the only country to produce more than 1,000,000 tons. Tree other countries each produced half a million tons or more; in decreasing order they were Zambia, Chile and USSR. This group was followed by two countries, Canada and Congo, producing 350,000 and 300,000 tons respectively. Finally, there was a group of smaller producers, led by Peru and Australia. It is worth noting that copper deposits are distributed relatively evenly in the world. They occur in large quantities in all continents except Arctic and Antarctic.
「評語」
該篇文章根據(jù)鋼產(chǎn)量的多少,將主要產(chǎn)鋼國分為四組分別進行了說明,層次分明。句式靈活,“one-fourth of world production coming from …”和“producing 350,00 and 300,000 tons …”等獨立主格、分詞狀語的恰當運用,使行文緊湊,文字精練,內(nèi)容主次分明,體現(xiàn)了上表的主要數(shù)據(jù)特征。

