「要求」
根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)篇日記，字?jǐn)?shù)：100—160.
7月23日，晴。
放學(xué)回家路上，我見(jiàn)一位老大爺背著沉甸甸的袋子站在路旁，樣子十分焦急。我走上去問(wèn)是怎么回事，原來(lái)老大爺剛從鄉(xiāng)下來(lái)，進(jìn)城看在工廠(chǎng)工作的兒子。由于是初次來(lái)，不認(rèn)識(shí)去工廠(chǎng)的路。于是，我就幫他背袋，帶他去工廠(chǎng)找兒子。好不容易才找到他兒子的家，老大爺和兒子十分感激。我回家時(shí)天已很晚，又累又餓，但心里卻甜滋滋的。因?yàn)槲矣譃閯e人做了一件好事。
「范文」
July 23th， Sunny
After school， on my way home I caught sight of an old grandpa standing by the roadside with a heavy bag on his back. He looked rather anxious. I went up to find out what the matter was. He told me that he had just come from the countryside to see his son who worked in a factory. He had never been here before， and didn't know the way to the factory. So I took over his bag and took him to the factory. We had some difficulty in finding his son's apartment. Both the grandpa and his son were very thankful.
It was very late when I got home. I was very tired and hungry. But I was very happy that I had done a good deed for others.
「評(píng)語(yǔ)」
日記記敘了一件自己助人為樂(lè)的好事。首先交待的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件經(jīng)過(guò)，記敘完整，使人覺(jué)得真實(shí)可信。本文連詞運(yùn)用十分到位，值得借鑒。
根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)篇日記，字?jǐn)?shù)：100—160.
7月23日，晴。
放學(xué)回家路上，我見(jiàn)一位老大爺背著沉甸甸的袋子站在路旁，樣子十分焦急。我走上去問(wèn)是怎么回事，原來(lái)老大爺剛從鄉(xiāng)下來(lái)，進(jìn)城看在工廠(chǎng)工作的兒子。由于是初次來(lái)，不認(rèn)識(shí)去工廠(chǎng)的路。于是，我就幫他背袋，帶他去工廠(chǎng)找兒子。好不容易才找到他兒子的家，老大爺和兒子十分感激。我回家時(shí)天已很晚，又累又餓，但心里卻甜滋滋的。因?yàn)槲矣譃閯e人做了一件好事。
「范文」
July 23th， Sunny
After school， on my way home I caught sight of an old grandpa standing by the roadside with a heavy bag on his back. He looked rather anxious. I went up to find out what the matter was. He told me that he had just come from the countryside to see his son who worked in a factory. He had never been here before， and didn't know the way to the factory. So I took over his bag and took him to the factory. We had some difficulty in finding his son's apartment. Both the grandpa and his son were very thankful.
It was very late when I got home. I was very tired and hungry. But I was very happy that I had done a good deed for others.
「評(píng)語(yǔ)」
日記記敘了一件自己助人為樂(lè)的好事。首先交待的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件經(jīng)過(guò)，記敘完整，使人覺(jué)得真實(shí)可信。本文連詞運(yùn)用十分到位，值得借鑒。