雅思寫(xiě)作低分原因3

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非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞方式處理示例
    示例1:I sat beside her. I felt very nervous .
    可變?yōu)椋篠itting beside her, I felt very nervous.
    或者:I sat beside her, feeling very nervous.
    示例2:I want to quit smoking. I eat candies.
    可變?yōu)椋篢o quit smoking, I eat candies.
    示例3:A young man was tired of sleeping on the floor. He saved up for years to buy a real bed.
    可以變?yōu)椋篢ired of sleeping on the floor, a young man saved up for years to buy a real bed.
    示例4:Jimmy was dressed up as Father Christmas. He was accompanied by a guard of honor of six pretty girls. He set off down the main street of the city. He rode a baby elephant. The elephant was called Jumbo.
    可以變?yōu)椋篋ressed up as Father Christmas and accompanied by a guard of honor of six pretty girls, Jimmy set off down the main street of the city, riding a baby elephant called Jumbo.
    定語(yǔ)從句方式處理
    定語(yǔ)從句當(dāng)然是屬于“從屬”的行列,所以,是處理為從屬方式的手段之一,而且用途極大。請(qǐng)看下面的例子:
    This is the only book.
    I read the book during the holiday.
    兩句的重合點(diǎn)在the book上面;將第二句中的the book抽出來(lái),放到第一句book后面,其它內(nèi)容向后甩。這樣,我們就會(huì)看到the only book后面馬上又在重復(fù)the book。為了避免重復(fù),我們?nèi)サ魌he book,而換用另外一個(gè)詞去替換,這個(gè)詞就是定語(yǔ)從句中指物的which或that。因?yàn)檫@里的book有only在修飾,所以,終我們選用that;又因?yàn)閠hat在定語(yǔ)從句中作賓語(yǔ),所以,可以省略。這樣,兩句就合并為:
    This is the only book (that) I read during the holiday.
    下面兩句的合并遵循同樣的原則:
    She is the girl.
    The girl’s father is my boss.
    èShe is the girl the girl’s father is my bossè
    She is the girl who (’s) father is my boss.
    èShe is the girl whose father is my boss.
    結(jié)束語(yǔ):
    這些內(nèi)容貌似簡(jiǎn)單,其實(shí)恰恰是高水平階段常犯的錯(cuò)誤,非常令人費(fèi)解。我輔導(dǎo)了多位從國(guó)外留學(xué)歸來(lái)再參加雅思與托??荚嚨耐瑢W(xué),包括在國(guó)外學(xué)習(xí)了8年之久的,可惜,還是頻頻“違規(guī)”。