雅思寫作低分原因3

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非謂語動詞方式處理示例
    示例1:I sat beside her. I felt very nervous .
    可變?yōu)椋篠itting beside her, I felt very nervous.
    或者:I sat beside her, feeling very nervous.
    示例2:I want to quit smoking. I eat candies.
    可變?yōu)椋篢o quit smoking, I eat candies.
    示例3:A young man was tired of sleeping on the floor. He saved up for years to buy a real bed.
    可以變?yōu)椋篢ired of sleeping on the floor, a young man saved up for years to buy a real bed.
    示例4:Jimmy was dressed up as Father Christmas. He was accompanied by a guard of honor of six pretty girls. He set off down the main street of the city. He rode a baby elephant. The elephant was called Jumbo.
    可以變?yōu)椋篋ressed up as Father Christmas and accompanied by a guard of honor of six pretty girls, Jimmy set off down the main street of the city, riding a baby elephant called Jumbo.
    定語從句方式處理
    定語從句當然是屬于“從屬”的行列,所以,是處理為從屬方式的手段之一,而且用途極大。請看下面的例子:
    This is the only book.
    I read the book during the holiday.
    兩句的重合點在the book上面;將第二句中的the book抽出來,放到第一句book后面,其它內容向后甩。這樣,我們就會看到the only book后面馬上又在重復the book。為了避免重復,我們去掉the book,而換用另外一個詞去替換,這個詞就是定語從句中指物的which或that。因為這里的book有only在修飾,所以,終我們選用that;又因為that在定語從句中作賓語,所以,可以省略。這樣,兩句就合并為:
    This is the only book (that) I read during the holiday.
    下面兩句的合并遵循同樣的原則:
    She is the girl.
    The girl’s father is my boss.
    èShe is the girl the girl’s father is my bossè
    She is the girl who (’s) father is my boss.
    èShe is the girl whose father is my boss.
    結束語:
    這些內容貌似簡單,其實恰恰是高水平階段常犯的錯誤,非常令人費解。我輔導了多位從國外留學歸來再參加雅思與托??荚嚨耐瑢W,包括在國外學習了8年之久的,可惜,還是頻頻“違規(guī)”。