作為最經(jīng)典的雅思復(fù)習(xí)資料，劍橋系列在作文部分一直以來(lái)都有一個(gè)重大的不足：范文不全－只有一部分的作文在書(shū)的最后部分提供了考官寫(xiě)的高分范文，相當(dāng)一部分的topic后面只有考生寫(xiě)的，分?jǐn)?shù)也各不相同的“參考文章”－大部份還都是低分“范文”。像劍6當(dāng)中A類(lèi)第二套試卷的小作文(劍6的52頁(yè))，很經(jīng)典的一個(gè)table題，可惜后面只有一篇考生寫(xiě)的相當(dāng)平庸的6分“范文”，明顯缺乏學(xué)習(xí)研究的價(jià)值。在此Akata幫大家搜羅了兩篇這個(gè)表格題的范文。
The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England
between 1985 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting
the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Report1
The table indicates the number of miles by the average English person in 1985 and 2000, using various means of transport.
The number of miles walked, cycled and travelled by local bus all decreased. Of these, the number of miles travelled by local bus decreased the most, from 429 miles in 1985 to 274 miles in 2000.
The number of miles travelled by car, long distance bus, train and taxi all increased.
The number of miles driven by car was 3,199 in 1985 and rose by 50% to 4,806 in 2000. The number of miles travelled by long distance bus more than doubled from 54 miles
(1985)to 124 miles (2000). The number of miles driven by taxi trebled from 13 miles
(1985) to 42 miles (2000). The use of other, unspecified, forms of transport also
increased.
Overall, the number of miles travelled by the average English person rose from 4,740
miles in 1985 to 6,475 miles in 2000, with the increase of cars accounting for almost
all of that increase. (173 words)
The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England
between 1985 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting
the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Report1
The table indicates the number of miles by the average English person in 1985 and 2000, using various means of transport.
The number of miles walked, cycled and travelled by local bus all decreased. Of these, the number of miles travelled by local bus decreased the most, from 429 miles in 1985 to 274 miles in 2000.
The number of miles travelled by car, long distance bus, train and taxi all increased.
The number of miles driven by car was 3,199 in 1985 and rose by 50% to 4,806 in 2000. The number of miles travelled by long distance bus more than doubled from 54 miles
(1985)to 124 miles (2000). The number of miles driven by taxi trebled from 13 miles
(1985) to 42 miles (2000). The use of other, unspecified, forms of transport also
increased.
Overall, the number of miles travelled by the average English person rose from 4,740
miles in 1985 to 6,475 miles in 2000, with the increase of cars accounting for almost
all of that increase. (173 words)