長短句主題句--四六級寫作“六項基本原則”

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一、長短句原則
     短句放在段首或者段末,可以揭示主題:
     As a creature , I eat; as a man , I read. Although one action is
    to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual
    need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
     強烈建議:在文章第一段用一長一短開頭;在文章主體部分,要先用一個短
    句介紹主要意思,然后在闡述幾個要點的時候采用先短后長的句群形式;文章結(jié)
    尾一般用一長一短就可以了。
     二、主題句原則
     三、一二三原則
     1 )in the first place, in the second place, lastly
     2 )to begin with , furthermore, finally
     3 )to start with , in addition, finally
     4 )first and foremost, besides, last but not least
     5 )for one thing , for another thing(適用于兩點的情況)
     四、短語優(yōu)先原則
     兩個好處:其一、用短語會使文章增加亮點;其二、湊字數(shù)
     I cannot bear it. 可以用短語表達:I cannot put up with it.
     I want it.可以用短語表達:I am looking forward to it.
     五、多實少虛原則
     一定要多用實詞,少用虛詞(比較大的詞)。good, nice 空洞,generous,
    humorous, smart, gentle , warm-hearted , hospitable 形象。再比如:
    走出房間空洞的詞是:walk out of the room
     但是
     小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說:slip/sneak out of the room
     小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說:sail out of the room
     小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說:dance out of the room
     老人走出房間應(yīng)該說:stagger out of the room
     六、多變句式原則
     1 )加法(串聯(lián))
     2 )轉(zhuǎn)折(拐彎抹角)
     3 )因果
     4 )失衡句(頭重腳輕,或者頭輕腳重)
     5 )附加(多此一舉)
     Ms. Pan , an English teacher who has taught us for three semesters
    ,is easy-going.
     6 )排比(排山倒海句)
     一個個排比句,一個個對偶句,一個個不定式,一個個短語,使文章有排山
    倒海之勢!
     Whether your tastes are modern or traditional , sophisticated or
    simple, there is plenty in London for you.
     Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as
    oil , coal , natural gas, solar heat , wind and ocean tides.