成都06屆高三第二次檢測(cè)-英語(yǔ)4

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第四部分寫(xiě)作(共兩節(jié),滿分35分)第一節(jié)短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題;每小題1分,滿分10分)
    此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷:如無(wú)錯(cuò)誤,在該行右邊橫線上畫(huà)一個(gè)勾(I/);如有錯(cuò)誤(每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤),則按下列情況改正:
    此行多一個(gè)詞:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉,在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該詞,并也用斜線劃掉。
    此行缺一個(gè)詞:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
    此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出改正后的詞。
    注意:原文沒(méi)有錯(cuò)的不要改。
    Balloons have used for sports for about one hundred years. 76. __________
    There are two kinds sport balloons, gas and hot air. Hot air 77. __________
    balloons are preferred by balloonists because of their safe. 78. __________
    They are also cheaper but easier to manage than gas balloons. 79. __________
    Sport balloon flights are best early in the morning or late 80. __________
    in the afternoon when a wind is light, and pilots must watch 81. __________
    the weather more carefully. Over the years, balloonists have 82. __________
    tried again and again to cross the Atlantic Ocean. It was until 83. __________
    1979 that three American balloonists succeed .It took them just 84. __________
    six days to make the trip away from the States to Paris, France. 85. __________
    第二節(jié)書(shū)面表達(dá)(滿分25分)
    請(qǐng)仔細(xì)閱讀《News Report))雜志社的下則英語(yǔ)新聞,然后根據(jù)中文提示續(xù)寫(xiě)此報(bào)道。
    注意:1.內(nèi)容須包含表中所列觀點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié),使其連貫、完整。
    2.詞數(shù):100左右(不含已給出的英文部分)。
    贊成的理由
    擔(dān)憂的問(wèn)題
    學(xué)生
    更多自由支配時(shí)間
    父母要求他們參加各種培訓(xùn)課程
    家長(zhǎng)
    孩子睡眠更充足
    孩子能否成功通過(guò)考試
    教師
    素質(zhì)教育效果會(huì)更好
    學(xué)生能否用好課余時(shí)間
    3.參考詞匯:素質(zhì)教育quality education
    As the primary and middle school children start their new term, our local education administrations has adopted some new policies to reduce the pressure on students, in order to return enough time and happiness to the students. Now the local primary and middle schools have practised the new School Time, that is, the students begin to attend class at8:30 a. m or 9:00 a. m and leave the school at 5 p. m from Monday to Friday. "This new policy has been in effect since last month but caused a heated discussion.
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    成都市2006屆高中畢業(yè)班第二次診斷性檢測(cè)
    英語(yǔ)試題參考答案及評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
    1-5 CBBAC 6-10 CACCB 11-15 CABAC 16--20 BACCB
    21-25 BACAD 26-30 ADCAB 31-35 CDBCC 36-40 BCACD
    41-45 CADBA 46-50 CBCCB 51--55 CADAB 56-60 CCDAC61-65 BCDBC
    66-70 AACAD 71-75 DACDB
    76,在used前加been 77.在kinds后加of 78. safe --safety 79. but-and 80.正確
    81. a--the 82.去掉more 83.在was后加not 84. succeed、succeeded 85,去掉away書(shū)面表達(dá)
    一、評(píng)分原則
    1.本題總分為25分,按5個(gè)檔次給分。
    2.評(píng)分時(shí),先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量,確定或調(diào)整檔次給分。
    3.詞數(shù)少于80或多于120的,從總分中減去2分。
    4.評(píng)分時(shí),應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為:內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上
    下文的連貫性及語(yǔ)言的得體性。
    5.拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面,評(píng)分時(shí),應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受?!?BR>    6.如一}I寫(xiě)較差,以至影響交際,將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。二.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)
    1.學(xué)生有更多自由支配時(shí)間;
    2,學(xué)生擔(dān)心父母要求他們參加各種培訓(xùn)課程;3.家長(zhǎng)認(rèn)為孩子睡眠更充足;
    4-.家長(zhǎng)擔(dān)心孩子能否成功通過(guò)考試;5.教師認(rèn)為素質(zhì)教育效果會(huì)更好;
    6.教師擔(dān)心學(xué)生是否都能用好課余時(shí)間。三、各檔次的給分范圍和要求
    第五檔:(21-25分)
    完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。一覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。
    一應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。
    一語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤,但為盡力使用復(fù)雜的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致;具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。
    一有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
    完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。
    第四檔:(16-20分)
    完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
    一雖漏掉1,2個(gè)次重點(diǎn),但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。一應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。
    一語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯力面應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確,些i誤主要是因嘗試較復(fù)雜的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或司淚W.致?!獞?yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
    達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。
    第三檔:(11-15分)
    基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
    一雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容,但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。
    一應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。
    一有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,但不影響理解。一應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文內(nèi)容連貫。
    整體而言,基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。
    第二檔:(6-10分)
    未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定任務(wù)。
    一漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容。一語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯知識(shí)有限。
    一有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,影響了對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解。一較少使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。
    信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者。
    第一檔:(1-5分)
    未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
    一明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容,原因可能是未理解試題要求。一語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限。
    一較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,影響對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解。一缺乏語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容不連貫。
    信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。
    0分
    未能傳達(dá)給讀者任何信息;內(nèi)容太少,無(wú)法評(píng)判;寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無(wú)關(guān)或所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容無(wú)法看清。
    One possible version
    As the primary and middle school children start their new term, our local education administrations has adopted some new policies to reduce the pressure on students, in order to return enough time and happiness to the students. Now the local primary and middle schools have practised the new School Time, that is, the students begin to attend class at8:30 am or 9:00 am. and leave the school at 5 pm. from Monday to Friday. This new policy has been in effect since last month but caused a heated discussion.
    The majority of the students are pleased with this policy for enjoying more free time to explore their talents or have more hands-on experience. Meanwhile, some of them feel a little afraid of being forced to take part in various training courses by their parent.
    While most of the parents accept the policy, considering adequate sleep for their children, some parents doubt whether their chit少en can pass the exams successfully.
    Of course, teachers are in favor of it for its better effect on quality education. However, they are also worried whether all students are able to make good use of the spare time after school.
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