08年6月六級(jí)寫作預(yù)測(cè)-留學(xué)申請(qǐng)信

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter of application for a MBA program in Columbia University. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1. 介紹你目前所學(xué)專業(yè);
    2. 介紹個(gè)人特長(zhǎng)愛(ài)好以及性格;
    3. 說(shuō)明為什么申請(qǐng)?jiān)撔5腗BA.
    ●審題概述●
    這是一封留學(xué)申請(qǐng)信。要提供申請(qǐng)人的個(gè)人資歷,寫明申請(qǐng)學(xué)校和所學(xué)專業(yè)以及申請(qǐng)的理由。
    「范文」
    Dear Sir,
    ①I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in the MBA program in your university.
    My name is Li Ming, and I am an ①undergraduate student of Marketing in Nanjing University. During the last four years, I have been studying hard and also working hard for the Students' Union. I am careful to ②keep a balance between study and ③extracurricular activities. I have won from the University various scholarships for my good study and my efficient Student's Union work.
    I'm interested in business and wish I could ①further my study overseas. I choose Columbia University because you have a long history and enjoy a good reputation in this field. I believe my interests are extremely ②congruent with the strengths of your school, and my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.
    I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
    Sincerely yours,
    Li Ming
    ◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng):
    直接表明要申請(qǐng)的專業(yè)
    ◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示:
    ①I am writing in the hope that:申請(qǐng)信常用句式
    ◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng):
    個(gè)人情況簡(jiǎn)介
    ◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示:
    ①undergraduate:意為“大學(xué)生”
    ②keep a balance between:意為“保持平衡”
    ③extracurricular activities:意為“課外活動(dòng)”
    ◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng):
    說(shuō)明申請(qǐng)?jiān)撔5脑?BR>    ◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示:
    ①further:意為“促進(jìn),進(jìn)一步”
    ②congruent with:意為“適合的,適當(dāng)?shù)摹?BR>