一、舉實例
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they film him or her.
二、做比較
方法:寫完一個要點,比較與之相似的;又寫完一個要點,再比較與之相反的;
相似的比較:in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比較:on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
三、換言之
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
結(jié)尾
結(jié)尾需要靈活創(chuàng)造。一般的習(xí)慣是,一些記敘文和描寫文經(jīng)常采用自然結(jié)尾的方法;但說理性和邏輯性較強的說明文和議論文則往往都有結(jié)束語,以便使文章首尾呼應(yīng),結(jié)構(gòu)完整。
1. 首尾呼應(yīng),畫龍點睛
After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of others.
2. 重復(fù)主題句
3. 用反問結(jié)尾
How far can we go if the current situation is not to be changed?
4. 指明方向,激勵讀者
As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work better. A sound mind is in a sound body. Let‘s go in for sports.
結(jié)尾萬能公式:
一. 結(jié)論
Obviously(此為過渡短語), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
二. 建議
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.(虛擬語氣用得經(jīng)典)
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
檢查四個重點部位,把好最后一關(guān)
1) 是否切題(主題句)
2) 是否連貫
檢驗的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)主要是句子是否通順,該用連接詞的地方用了沒有,以及所用的連接詞是否合適。
3) 是否有語法錯誤
主謂是否一致,動詞的時態(tài)、語態(tài)、語氣的使用是否正確,詞組的搭配是否合乎習(xí)慣。為避免不必要的語法錯誤,對把握性不大的詞組、句型絕不要用。而應(yīng)使用那些自己熟悉的詞組、句型來表達(dá)相同或相近的意思。
4)是否有大小寫、拼寫、標(biāo)點錯誤
在這些細(xì)枝末節(jié)上,謹(jǐn)慎細(xì)心地處理,無疑會進一步提高文章的整體質(zhì)量。在檢查、改錯的過程中,切忌亂涂亂抹。保持卷面清潔,會給閱卷者留下好印象
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they film him or her.
二、做比較
方法:寫完一個要點,比較與之相似的;又寫完一個要點,再比較與之相反的;
相似的比較:in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比較:on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
三、換言之
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
結(jié)尾
結(jié)尾需要靈活創(chuàng)造。一般的習(xí)慣是,一些記敘文和描寫文經(jīng)常采用自然結(jié)尾的方法;但說理性和邏輯性較強的說明文和議論文則往往都有結(jié)束語,以便使文章首尾呼應(yīng),結(jié)構(gòu)完整。
1. 首尾呼應(yīng),畫龍點睛
After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of others.
2. 重復(fù)主題句
3. 用反問結(jié)尾
How far can we go if the current situation is not to be changed?
4. 指明方向,激勵讀者
As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work better. A sound mind is in a sound body. Let‘s go in for sports.
結(jié)尾萬能公式:
一. 結(jié)論
Obviously(此為過渡短語), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
二. 建議
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.(虛擬語氣用得經(jīng)典)
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
檢查四個重點部位,把好最后一關(guān)
1) 是否切題(主題句)
2) 是否連貫
檢驗的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)主要是句子是否通順,該用連接詞的地方用了沒有,以及所用的連接詞是否合適。
3) 是否有語法錯誤
主謂是否一致,動詞的時態(tài)、語態(tài)、語氣的使用是否正確,詞組的搭配是否合乎習(xí)慣。為避免不必要的語法錯誤,對把握性不大的詞組、句型絕不要用。而應(yīng)使用那些自己熟悉的詞組、句型來表達(dá)相同或相近的意思。
4)是否有大小寫、拼寫、標(biāo)點錯誤
在這些細(xì)枝末節(jié)上,謹(jǐn)慎細(xì)心地處理,無疑會進一步提高文章的整體質(zhì)量。在檢查、改錯的過程中,切忌亂涂亂抹。保持卷面清潔,會給閱卷者留下好印象