新四級(jí)作文變動(dòng)不大，仍重在考察考生的語(yǔ)言綜合運(yùn)用能力，在備考中一定要重視基本詞匯，句型的綜合運(yùn)用，模仿揣摩范文，研究真題。另外多從閱讀中吸取養(yǎng)份，每周保證一到兩篇作文，自己改也可以和學(xué)友們互相改，總結(jié)吸收。這樣才能穩(wěn)扎穩(wěn)打提高實(shí)力！在這里我們就從詞句段點(diǎn)滴做起，妙筆生花，笑傲四級(jí)。
NO.I ---英語(yǔ)作文之選詞策略
作文的第一環(huán)節(jié)是選詞,英語(yǔ)不像漢語(yǔ)那樣的選詞標(biāo)準(zhǔn),后者更偏重文采,而英語(yǔ)作文講究平易,樸實(shí),簡(jiǎn)潔,堆砌辭藻不僅不能得高分,反而讓人覺(jué)得啰嗦. 漢語(yǔ)中多概略化的詞(general words),而英語(yǔ)中要求具體,明晰(specific & clear words )。
A.概略化與具體化
e.g ：作文中用的較多的概略化的詞,如good,bad，其實(shí)有很多具體化的詞可以代替它們，如:
1. It is beneficial to do physical exercises every day.(代替good )
2. It the weather is favorable,we are going to climb the mountain.(代替good)
3. This method has both positive and negative effects.(代替good &bad)
B 重復(fù)與簡(jiǎn)潔
同樣的意思如果用在文章中的不同位置，就要考慮換詞了哦。如：“很流行”就有become popular, enjoy great popularity,gain increasingly popularity.etc..
e.g:Education is important to one’s career.Most of the young people hope to get higher education at college.
However,the tuiton for college education is quite high,it is hard for some students to afford the money.How can one get enough money to pay the tuition?
In fact,there are many ways to solve the problem.....besides these two ways ,one can get loan from the bank.
Among the three means mentioned above,I don’t think the second way is quite good.
這是一篇作文的三個(gè)不同片段。大家仔細(xì)讀會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)“get”出現(xiàn)了三次。所以老師的修改建議里，第一個(gè)和第三個(gè)分別用“acquire,obtain”代替。
在很多情況下我們會(huì)有意識(shí)到地避免重復(fù)名詞但副詞和形容詞的重復(fù)卻沒(méi)有引起重視，：歷史古跡/重要轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)/寶貴財(cái)富，這些常被我們不假思索地寫成“historical relic,important turning point,valuable treasure”事實(shí)上，它們的意思都暗含在后一個(gè)詞當(dāng)中
亮點(diǎn)詞匯--DIVERSITY （記住哦）
網(wǎng)絡(luò): the net / the Internet / the web / the virtual world / the electronic world / the cyber world
地球: earth / the Planet earth / our Mother Planet / global village
電腦: the computer / the machine / the device
校園: the campus / the Ivory Tower / the relatively isolated place
社會(huì): the society / the real world
中國(guó): China / the Middle Kingdom / this ancient country
隨著...的發(fā)展: As... evolves
...變的越來(lái)越重要.. is becoming increasingly vital
...變的越來(lái)越普遍.. is becoming increasingly prevalent
人們對(duì)...越來(lái)越重視 People have a growing respect for sth.
人們重視/看中/珍愛(ài)某物 place a high value on sth.
增強(qiáng)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力 sharpen one’s edge
使某人具有優(yōu)勢(shì)力 give sb. the edge
...很重要 is vital / crucial / essential
起...重要作用 play a central role in
觀點(diǎn)類:
對(duì)...有好處 ... pays off / it pays to .. / sth. is beneficial (rewarding)
對(duì)...有壞處... have a negative impact on / do harm (damage) to sth.
好 top / superior students / favorable impact / positive impression
壞 poor / inferior quality / faulty goods / negative impression
促進(jìn)/提高/增強(qiáng)/改善 give a boost to ，enhance
NO.I ---英語(yǔ)作文之選詞策略
作文的第一環(huán)節(jié)是選詞,英語(yǔ)不像漢語(yǔ)那樣的選詞標(biāo)準(zhǔn),后者更偏重文采,而英語(yǔ)作文講究平易,樸實(shí),簡(jiǎn)潔,堆砌辭藻不僅不能得高分,反而讓人覺(jué)得啰嗦. 漢語(yǔ)中多概略化的詞(general words),而英語(yǔ)中要求具體,明晰(specific & clear words )。
A.概略化與具體化
e.g ：作文中用的較多的概略化的詞,如good,bad，其實(shí)有很多具體化的詞可以代替它們，如:
1. It is beneficial to do physical exercises every day.(代替good )
2. It the weather is favorable,we are going to climb the mountain.(代替good)
3. This method has both positive and negative effects.(代替good &bad)
B 重復(fù)與簡(jiǎn)潔
同樣的意思如果用在文章中的不同位置，就要考慮換詞了哦。如：“很流行”就有become popular, enjoy great popularity,gain increasingly popularity.etc..
e.g:Education is important to one’s career.Most of the young people hope to get higher education at college.
However,the tuiton for college education is quite high,it is hard for some students to afford the money.How can one get enough money to pay the tuition?
In fact,there are many ways to solve the problem.....besides these two ways ,one can get loan from the bank.
Among the three means mentioned above,I don’t think the second way is quite good.
這是一篇作文的三個(gè)不同片段。大家仔細(xì)讀會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)“get”出現(xiàn)了三次。所以老師的修改建議里，第一個(gè)和第三個(gè)分別用“acquire,obtain”代替。
在很多情況下我們會(huì)有意識(shí)到地避免重復(fù)名詞但副詞和形容詞的重復(fù)卻沒(méi)有引起重視，：歷史古跡/重要轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)/寶貴財(cái)富，這些常被我們不假思索地寫成“historical relic,important turning point,valuable treasure”事實(shí)上，它們的意思都暗含在后一個(gè)詞當(dāng)中
亮點(diǎn)詞匯--DIVERSITY （記住哦）
網(wǎng)絡(luò): the net / the Internet / the web / the virtual world / the electronic world / the cyber world
地球: earth / the Planet earth / our Mother Planet / global village
電腦: the computer / the machine / the device
校園: the campus / the Ivory Tower / the relatively isolated place
社會(huì): the society / the real world
中國(guó): China / the Middle Kingdom / this ancient country
隨著...的發(fā)展: As... evolves
...變的越來(lái)越重要.. is becoming increasingly vital
...變的越來(lái)越普遍.. is becoming increasingly prevalent
人們對(duì)...越來(lái)越重視 People have a growing respect for sth.
人們重視/看中/珍愛(ài)某物 place a high value on sth.
增強(qiáng)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力 sharpen one’s edge
使某人具有優(yōu)勢(shì)力 give sb. the edge
...很重要 is vital / crucial / essential
起...重要作用 play a central role in
觀點(diǎn)類:
對(duì)...有好處 ... pays off / it pays to .. / sth. is beneficial (rewarding)
對(duì)...有壞處... have a negative impact on / do harm (damage) to sth.
好 top / superior students / favorable impact / positive impression
壞 poor / inferior quality / faulty goods / negative impression
促進(jìn)/提高/增強(qiáng)/改善 give a boost to ，enhance