比較型作文之11分作文
比較型作文一般分為說明式比較和議論式比較兩種。說明式比較在比較過程中，作者不發(fā)表個(gè)人意見，在文中不體現(xiàn)個(gè)人取向，單純以說明介紹為目的。
在四、六級考試中的比較型作文多以議論式比較的形式出現(xiàn)。議論式比較以比較事物優(yōu)劣、闡明自己立場為目的，一般分為傾向型和中立型兩種類型。
11分作文只是在8分作文的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行改進(jìn)，通過篇章的連貫、句型的優(yōu)化來實(shí)現(xiàn)。
一、連貫性
連貫性是寫作的一個(gè)重要原則。句子之間的鏈接主要通過銜接詞的使用體現(xiàn)連貫性，根據(jù)過渡銜接詞在篇章中的作用，可分為引介詞、承接詞和總結(jié)詞三大類：
1. 引介詞在篇章中擔(dān)當(dāng)引出話題或觀點(diǎn)的作用，根據(jù)其本身的含義，可細(xì)分如下：
（1）時(shí)間詞（組）：nowadays,at present,recently,now ,lately,in some cases;
（2）一般觀點(diǎn)詞（組）：in general,generally,generally spraking,as we know,as is known to all,as is generally accepted,regarding,concerning,as for... as to ..., as regards;
（3）個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)詞（組）：firstly,first of all ,in the firest place, to begin with , to start with , for one thing, as for me, in my opinion, on the one hand;
2.承接詞在篇章中承接主題句或上一個(gè)支持句，可表遞進(jìn)或轉(zhuǎn)折，根據(jù)其本身的含義，可分如下：
純粹承接詞：second(ly),third(ly),for another,on the other hand;
遞進(jìn)承接詞：besides,in addition, in addition to ,furthermore,moreover,namely;
并列承接詞：meanwhile,at the same time;
原因承接詞：because,for , as, in that,owing to,due to ,on accout of,on the groud of , as a result of;
比較承接詞：equally important,similarly,likewise,in the same way,in common;
對比承接詞：on the contrary, in contrast , by contrast , whereas,instead, conversely;
強(qiáng)調(diào)承接詞：in paricular, paricularly,most important of all,needless to say,especially,above all,on top of all this;
轉(zhuǎn)折讓步承接詞：although,though,nevertheless, however,but,yet , admittedly, it is true... but, in spite of , even though, granted that , despite, in spite of , unfortunately,nonetheless;
總結(jié)詞在篇章中推出結(jié)論和后果：
(1) 結(jié)果詞：thus , consequently,hence, therefore, accordingly,as a consequence, for this reason;
(2) 總結(jié)詞：in a word, all in all ,to sum up, briefly,in brief,in short,in summary,undoubtedly,by and large , as has been noted.
具有相似意義和功能的銜接詞在上下文可以靈活替換。
二、常用句型
1、首段常用句型：
Nowadays,there are two ways to do..., such as A and B.
It is widely accepted / an undeniable fact that...
Some people prefer A... while others...
There used to be a heated discussion over whether A is more important than B.
Those who are in favor of A argue that...
In my point of view, I like a much more than B.
Despite the fact that majority of people tend to / prefer to ... , I'm in favor of...
A and B are of the same / equal importance.While the former ... , the later ....
While I attach much importance to A, I won't give up any chance to do B.
2、主體部分常用句型：
A prides itself / themselves on sth however, its / their ... counterpart / B...
First and foremost, ... what's more,... Last but not least,...
Ranging from ... to ...（用于舉例事物）
When it comes to ... （用于引出話題）
A's merits mean nothing when B's advantages are considered / mentioned
Admittedly, / of course, / True, / It is true that A is..., but B...
However, for the demerits / disadvantages A has , it has the advantage that...
3、結(jié)尾段常用句型：
As a result /For this reason, I like doing...
In spite of the said advantages of A, I will choose B...
Of course,A has its own merits.But I'm still in favor of B.
Therefore,A and B are of equal importance. The former helps to do..., and the latter contributes to...
The secret of ... lies in the combination of both A and B.
作業(yè)：（以下為一篇8分范文，請練習(xí)變換句型，按要求改寫成句型結(jié)構(gòu)漂亮的11分作文）
It is often difficult for a student to decide whether he shall have roommates or not .In my oopinion, having roommates is always better.
要求：在粗體句中體現(xiàn)轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系；且用讓步句型體現(xiàn)于室友同住的優(yōu)點(diǎn)多于缺點(diǎn)。
Some students don't like having rommates. They think several people living together causes some unpleasantness because every person has his or her own way. We have the chance to learn to adjust the subtle relationships. Solving trivial problems will enrich our experience and help us understand others and learn to be considerate.
比較型作文一般分為說明式比較和議論式比較兩種。說明式比較在比較過程中，作者不發(fā)表個(gè)人意見，在文中不體現(xiàn)個(gè)人取向，單純以說明介紹為目的。
在四、六級考試中的比較型作文多以議論式比較的形式出現(xiàn)。議論式比較以比較事物優(yōu)劣、闡明自己立場為目的，一般分為傾向型和中立型兩種類型。
11分作文只是在8分作文的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行改進(jìn)，通過篇章的連貫、句型的優(yōu)化來實(shí)現(xiàn)。
一、連貫性
連貫性是寫作的一個(gè)重要原則。句子之間的鏈接主要通過銜接詞的使用體現(xiàn)連貫性，根據(jù)過渡銜接詞在篇章中的作用，可分為引介詞、承接詞和總結(jié)詞三大類：
1. 引介詞在篇章中擔(dān)當(dāng)引出話題或觀點(diǎn)的作用，根據(jù)其本身的含義，可細(xì)分如下：
（1）時(shí)間詞（組）：nowadays,at present,recently,now ,lately,in some cases;
（2）一般觀點(diǎn)詞（組）：in general,generally,generally spraking,as we know,as is known to all,as is generally accepted,regarding,concerning,as for... as to ..., as regards;
（3）個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)詞（組）：firstly,first of all ,in the firest place, to begin with , to start with , for one thing, as for me, in my opinion, on the one hand;
2.承接詞在篇章中承接主題句或上一個(gè)支持句，可表遞進(jìn)或轉(zhuǎn)折，根據(jù)其本身的含義，可分如下：
純粹承接詞：second(ly),third(ly),for another,on the other hand;
遞進(jìn)承接詞：besides,in addition, in addition to ,furthermore,moreover,namely;
并列承接詞：meanwhile,at the same time;
原因承接詞：because,for , as, in that,owing to,due to ,on accout of,on the groud of , as a result of;
比較承接詞：equally important,similarly,likewise,in the same way,in common;
對比承接詞：on the contrary, in contrast , by contrast , whereas,instead, conversely;
強(qiáng)調(diào)承接詞：in paricular, paricularly,most important of all,needless to say,especially,above all,on top of all this;
轉(zhuǎn)折讓步承接詞：although,though,nevertheless, however,but,yet , admittedly, it is true... but, in spite of , even though, granted that , despite, in spite of , unfortunately,nonetheless;
總結(jié)詞在篇章中推出結(jié)論和后果：
(1) 結(jié)果詞：thus , consequently,hence, therefore, accordingly,as a consequence, for this reason;
(2) 總結(jié)詞：in a word, all in all ,to sum up, briefly,in brief,in short,in summary,undoubtedly,by and large , as has been noted.
具有相似意義和功能的銜接詞在上下文可以靈活替換。
二、常用句型
1、首段常用句型：
Nowadays,there are two ways to do..., such as A and B.
It is widely accepted / an undeniable fact that...
Some people prefer A... while others...
There used to be a heated discussion over whether A is more important than B.
Those who are in favor of A argue that...
In my point of view, I like a much more than B.
Despite the fact that majority of people tend to / prefer to ... , I'm in favor of...
A and B are of the same / equal importance.While the former ... , the later ....
While I attach much importance to A, I won't give up any chance to do B.
2、主體部分常用句型：
A prides itself / themselves on sth however, its / their ... counterpart / B...
First and foremost, ... what's more,... Last but not least,...
Ranging from ... to ...（用于舉例事物）
When it comes to ... （用于引出話題）
A's merits mean nothing when B's advantages are considered / mentioned
Admittedly, / of course, / True, / It is true that A is..., but B...
However, for the demerits / disadvantages A has , it has the advantage that...
3、結(jié)尾段常用句型：
As a result /For this reason, I like doing...
In spite of the said advantages of A, I will choose B...
Of course,A has its own merits.But I'm still in favor of B.
Therefore,A and B are of equal importance. The former helps to do..., and the latter contributes to...
The secret of ... lies in the combination of both A and B.
作業(yè)：（以下為一篇8分范文，請練習(xí)變換句型，按要求改寫成句型結(jié)構(gòu)漂亮的11分作文）
It is often difficult for a student to decide whether he shall have roommates or not .In my oopinion, having roommates is always better.
要求：在粗體句中體現(xiàn)轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系；且用讓步句型體現(xiàn)于室友同住的優(yōu)點(diǎn)多于缺點(diǎn)。
Some students don't like having rommates. They think several people living together causes some unpleasantness because every person has his or her own way. We have the chance to learn to adjust the subtle relationships. Solving trivial problems will enrich our experience and help us understand others and learn to be considerate.