There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of替換do harm to
Emerging代替appearing ( fading代替disappearing )
Net citizen網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞
第五段：As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds替換Every coin has two sides
Computers do play，do強調(diào)
Positive替換important / good等
A slice of替換a part of
Unfavorable替換bad
Impacts替換effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of…使用插入語
Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換advantage ( defects替換disadvantage )
Facet替換aspect
各位同學(xué)，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎么會不得高分呢！
以下是30個最經(jīng)典的替換詞，各位同學(xué)可以參考一下。
1.individuals,characters, folks代替(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising
(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad
如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive代替
eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with
girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
Emerging代替appearing ( fading代替disappearing )
Net citizen網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞
第五段：As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds替換Every coin has two sides
Computers do play，do強調(diào)
Positive替換important / good等
A slice of替換a part of
Unfavorable替換bad
Impacts替換effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of…使用插入語
Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換advantage ( defects替換disadvantage )
Facet替換aspect
各位同學(xué)，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎么會不得高分呢！
以下是30個最經(jīng)典的替換詞，各位同學(xué)可以參考一下。
1.individuals,characters, folks代替(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising
(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad
如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive代替
eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with
girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.