四級考試作文寫作常識2

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3. 打腹稿
       
     打腹稿是不可省略的一步,但卻為許多人所忽視。其實打腹稿就相當(dāng)于我們平時寫作時打草稿,只是考試時沒有時間,也沒有紙用來打草稿。 建議平時寫作時,要養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣,即使在打草稿時也要仔細(xì)想一想要怎么寫,在腦子中先將文章“讀”一篇。
       
     打腹稿時,首先要考慮文章的開頭和結(jié)尾,然后是各個段落間的銜接和過渡,然后是各個句子怎樣寫,要注意用自己熟悉的、有把握的句子,同時也要注意句子之間的銜接與連貫。
       
     4. 抄寫
       
     嚴(yán)格地說,第四步僅僅是將前面三步的結(jié)果用筆寫到試卷上。這部分不應(yīng)占用太多的時間,真正需要時間的是前面的三步。
       
     5. 修改
       
     修改的主要任務(wù)是檢查一下有無拼寫和語法方面的錯誤,同時注意是否用詞有過多的重復(fù)。
       
     總之,在寫作時切忌一邊想一邊寫。
       
     二、文章的銜接與連貫
       
     在評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中,同是否扣題同樣重要的是文章的連貫性。往往有的文章扣題倒也扣題了,但還是得不了幾分,這其中的原因恐怕與連貫性有很大的關(guān)系。這里所說的連貫有兩兩層含義。一是指文章在內(nèi)容上是連貫、統(tǒng)一的,文章中所有的句子都是為全文的中心服務(wù)的。就各段而言,其中的每一句話都要緊緊圍繞著該段的主題句進(jìn)行,不能說與主題句無關(guān)的東西。有人也將其稱為統(tǒng)一性。請看一例:
       
     The weather has been changeable. On Sunday we had a high wind that blew down some trees. Monday was so cold that we had to turn on the heat and wear out winter coats. On Tuesday we formed a group to go roller skating. By Wednesday the weather cleared and the sun came out. Thursday was as hot and humid as an August day. Friday morning it began to rain, and it looks as if we’ll have a cold, steady wind for a few days.
       
     這一段寫“最近天氣多變”,首句為主題句。擴展句敘述了星期日、星期一、星期三、星期四和星期五的天氣情況,用以展開關(guān)鍵詞changeable。但星期二沒有提天氣,而是說當(dāng)天的活動安排,偏離了主題,打斷了段落敘述的連貫性,破壞了段落邏輯意義的統(tǒng)一性,應(yīng)刪去或改為與天氣有關(guān)的話。
       
     再如:
     Sports benefit us in many respects. When taking part in sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our body. There is no doubt that properly balanced physical activities keep us physically fit. Furthermore, sports can enrich our life and maintain our psychological health. Through participation, everyone can learn that on the playing field he not only competes for himself but also for his team. Sports teach us about consideration, cooperation and optimism, and how to cope with difficulties.