About my daughter (我的女兒)

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由于功課和測驗繁多,同學(xué)們上課時都疲憊不堪。所以我便談及一些跟我女兒有關(guān)的特別事情,使他們能提起精神。但因上課時間太短,我后來便通過STS補述。
    TEACHER'S
    Dear students,
    Many of you keep telling me that you have no time to write much to me because you are very tired and you have many quizzes and tests. I know and I understand the workload is heavy, especially for those really hard-working students who honestly do all the assignments by themselves and try their best to prepare for all the quizzes and tests. I know you are exhausted (extremely tired)。 I hope that you can have s sound sleep and have a nice dream when you are lying in bed.
    I was also very tired last night and also early this morning. I was so tired that I could not go on to write my STS. That is why I am doing it now. This morning I told you only a small part of a long story and now I want to tell you a little more. When my daughter was born, the nurse told me that there was a red birth-mark on her forehead. Normally, a parent is not happy when he/she hears that. But I felt happy about that. It was strange. I did not know why. The mark was something like a “V”-shaped figure. It did not make much sense. When she was about one or two months old, we took a picture of her. When my wife and I saw the photo, we both saw something
    “different”on her forehead. We saw the same thing. We were shocked (very surprised)。 I made a lot of dreams about that thing before she was born. At that time, I felt the birth-mark on my daughter's forehead was very meaningful. I told you to find out what It is but you could not. I won't tell you what it is. If you are interested, you may come and try again.
    I remember that when my daughter was born, all our family members believed that it was a miracle. It was because for some reason they thought my wife could not give birth to the baby by herself (without having an operation)。 But my wife did it herself. She had been labouring (much pain during that) for eleven hours before giving birth to my daughter. I stood by her bed from beginning to end, holding her hand and praying. I did not eat or drink anything and I did not even go to the toilet. After eleven hours, I was extremely tired and I said to God, in a weak voice, 'I need a miracle.’Right after that the good news came-she made it. I went back home at about two or three o'clock early in the morning to have a little sleep before going to school for work. As I was travelling on a bus to school later that morning, I recalled everything that took place the night before. I said to myself, “It was too painful for her (my wife) to give birth to this daughter”。 Then tears started to roll down my face. I could not help it (couldn't stop it)。 Love your parents, my dear. Do you hear me?
    Dennis
    當keep解作“繼續(xù)不斷”時,后面的動詞須加上+ing.
    香港的教師多用quiz代表“小測驗”而test則代表“正式測驗”。
    留意正確用法:
    ·He works hard. √
    ·He is a hard worker. √
    ·He is a hard student. ×
    ·He is a hard-working student. √
    assignment跟homework意思相近,但用法各異:
    ·much homework √
    ·many homeworks ×
    ·many assignments √
    留意不同解釋:
    ·Teachers prepare quizzes.=老師預(yù)備測驗(卷)。
    ·Students prepare for quizzes.=學(xué)生預(yù)備應(yīng)付測驗。
    sound作為形容詞的例子:sound argument(合理論點)或sound sleep(熟睡)
    留意不同用法:
    ·He is in bed. √
    ·He is in the bed. ×
    ·He is on the bed. √
    ·He is on his bed. √
    應(yīng)用 so…that 時有固定的句式:
    ·…so tired that… √
    ·…very tired that… ×
    birth-mark的意思是“胎記/胎痣”。
    若用過去完成時 had made,意思會更清楚。
    留意不同句式的寫法:
    ·He said, “What is it?” √
    ·I want to know what it is. √
    ·Please tell me what is it? ×
    ·Please tell me what it is. √
    some reason解作“某個原因”但 some reasons 則解作“一些原因”。
    表示懷孕和生育的句子:
    ·She had a child. √
    ·She gave birth to a child. √
    ·The baby was born. √
    ·The woman bore a child. √(舊時的寫法)
    留意正確用法:
    ·The doctor had an operation. ×
    ·The doctor did the operation. √
    ·The patient had an operation. √
    留意正確用法:
    ·After, the good news… ×
    ·After that, the good news… √
    留意兩者的不同用法:I try to recall(回憶) the happening but find that I do not remember(記得) very clearly.
    這里的 the night before 并不能以lastnight來代替,因為寫STS的時候已經(jīng)事隔數(shù)年了。
    LANGUAGE SKILL
    Assorted tenses
    在作文考試中,不要以為只要沒有語法錯誤,文章便能獲得好成績。因為批改作文不再用扣分制,而是采用“印象批改法”。若要取得好成績,需要適當?shù)仫@示出自己的英語能力,給閱卷者留下好印象。
    因此,在寫作文時應(yīng)盡可能運用不同的時態(tài)(tenses),使閱卷者深信你的語言能力不俗。請參考從本單元中挑選出來的例子。
    EXAMPLE
    1.…you have many quizzes…(一般現(xiàn)在時)
    2.I was also very tired last night.(一般過去時)
    3.…h(huán)ave a nice dream when you are lying in bed.(現(xiàn)在進行時)
    4.We were shocked.(被動語態(tài))
    5.I won't tell you what it is.(一般將來時)
    6.She had been labouring for eleven hours.(過去完成進行時)
    7.As I was travelling on a bus…(過去進行時)