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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1． 當(dāng)今的年輕人越來越強(qiáng)調(diào)個(gè)性發(fā)展；
2． 發(fā)展個(gè)性是否意味著忽視中國的傳統(tǒng)美德；
3． 你的觀點(diǎn)。
●審題概述●
這是一篇議論文，題目比較大。主要討論個(gè)性發(fā)展和傳統(tǒng)美德之間的關(guān)系。根據(jù)提示，可分為三部分：年輕人的個(gè)性發(fā)展，可以適當(dāng)舉例；個(gè)性發(fā)展是否意味著忽視傳統(tǒng)美德，可以籠統(tǒng)地講，也可以具體地解釋某一種美德；最后提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。
【范文】
Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues
Today’s youth do things in their own ways, spend money on whatever they want and talk to people in their own languages——personality development is 1overstated by young people these days. To some of them, personality means to be totally different from who their parents used to be.
But the problem is that during their pursuit of their personal goals they ignore some of the traditional virtues of which their 1forefathers were proud. Take the question of 2fidelity to elders for example. With better education and different experiences, some young people find it’s hard to agree with their parents any longer. They have a feeling of superiority and even sometimes 3turn their back on their elder parents.
To me, personality development and traditional virtues 1have nothing to do with right or wrong. In our society, we need them both. These virtues help you to become a better Chinese, while personality development will improve your own character.
◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：
個(gè)性的發(fā)展
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
1overstate：意為“夸大”
◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：
個(gè)性發(fā)展是否意味著忽視傳統(tǒng)美德
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
1forefather：意為“祖先”
2fidelity：意為“忠實(shí)，忠誠”
3turn one’s back on：意為“背棄，拋棄”
◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：
個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
1have nothing to do with：意為“ 與……無關(guān)”
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1． 當(dāng)今的年輕人越來越強(qiáng)調(diào)個(gè)性發(fā)展；
2． 發(fā)展個(gè)性是否意味著忽視中國的傳統(tǒng)美德；
3． 你的觀點(diǎn)。
●審題概述●
這是一篇議論文，題目比較大。主要討論個(gè)性發(fā)展和傳統(tǒng)美德之間的關(guān)系。根據(jù)提示，可分為三部分：年輕人的個(gè)性發(fā)展，可以適當(dāng)舉例；個(gè)性發(fā)展是否意味著忽視傳統(tǒng)美德，可以籠統(tǒng)地講，也可以具體地解釋某一種美德；最后提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。
【范文】
Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues
Today’s youth do things in their own ways, spend money on whatever they want and talk to people in their own languages——personality development is 1overstated by young people these days. To some of them, personality means to be totally different from who their parents used to be.
But the problem is that during their pursuit of their personal goals they ignore some of the traditional virtues of which their 1forefathers were proud. Take the question of 2fidelity to elders for example. With better education and different experiences, some young people find it’s hard to agree with their parents any longer. They have a feeling of superiority and even sometimes 3turn their back on their elder parents.
To me, personality development and traditional virtues 1have nothing to do with right or wrong. In our society, we need them both. These virtues help you to become a better Chinese, while personality development will improve your own character.
◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：
個(gè)性的發(fā)展
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
1overstate：意為“夸大”
◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：
個(gè)性發(fā)展是否意味著忽視傳統(tǒng)美德
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
1forefather：意為“祖先”
2fidelity：意為“忠實(shí)，忠誠”
3turn one’s back on：意為“背棄，拋棄”
◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：
個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
1have nothing to do with：意為“ 與……無關(guān)”