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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter of application for a MBA program in Columbia University. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1． 介紹你目前所學專業(yè)；
2． 介紹個人特長愛好以及性格；
3． 說明為什么申請該校的MBA。
●審題概述●
這是一封留學申請信。要提供申請人的個人資歷，寫明申請學校和所學專業(yè)以及申請的理由。
【范文】
Dear Sir,
1I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in the MBA program in your university.
My name is Li Ming, and I am an 1undergraduate student of Marketing in Nanjing University. During the last four years, I have been studying hard and also working hard for the Students’ Union. I am careful to 2keep a balance between study and 3extracurricular activities. I have won from the University various scholarships for my good study and my efficient Student’s Union work.
I’m interested in business and wish I could 1further my study overseas. I choose Columbia University because you have a long history and enjoy a good reputation in this field. I believe my interests are extremely 2congruent with the strengths of your school, and my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
◇第一段思路點評：
直接表明要申請的專業(yè)
◇語言點提示：
1I am writing in the hope that：申請信常用句式
◇第二段思路點評：
個人情況簡介
◇語言點提示：
1undergraduate：意為“大學生”
2keep a balance between：意為“保持平衡”
3extracurricular activities：意為“課外活動”
◇第三段思路點評：
說明申請該校的原因
◇語言點提示：
1further：意為“促進，進一步”
2congruent with：意為“適合的，適當?shù)摹?BR>
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter of application for a MBA program in Columbia University. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1． 介紹你目前所學專業(yè)；
2． 介紹個人特長愛好以及性格；
3． 說明為什么申請該校的MBA。
●審題概述●
這是一封留學申請信。要提供申請人的個人資歷，寫明申請學校和所學專業(yè)以及申請的理由。
【范文】
Dear Sir,
1I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in the MBA program in your university.
My name is Li Ming, and I am an 1undergraduate student of Marketing in Nanjing University. During the last four years, I have been studying hard and also working hard for the Students’ Union. I am careful to 2keep a balance between study and 3extracurricular activities. I have won from the University various scholarships for my good study and my efficient Student’s Union work.
I’m interested in business and wish I could 1further my study overseas. I choose Columbia University because you have a long history and enjoy a good reputation in this field. I believe my interests are extremely 2congruent with the strengths of your school, and my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
◇第一段思路點評：
直接表明要申請的專業(yè)
◇語言點提示：
1I am writing in the hope that：申請信常用句式
◇第二段思路點評：
個人情況簡介
◇語言點提示：
1undergraduate：意為“大學生”
2keep a balance between：意為“保持平衡”
3extracurricular activities：意為“課外活動”
◇第三段思路點評：
說明申請該校的原因
◇語言點提示：
1further：意為“促進，進一步”
2congruent with：意為“適合的，適當?shù)摹?BR>